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Favorite Level: Deadlocked
Hardest Demon: e6a419
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Post by . on May 8, 2016 1:40:37 GMT -5
ID: 19635489
A crazy collab with CreatorAlx! Probably our best level! Suggested Rate: Harder 7*
Thanks for judging!
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Post by purplecoin777 on May 9, 2016 18:27:21 GMT -5
I'm not a level judge, but I still want to try and review some levels in hopes of becoming one, so here's a review:
Gameplay: 2.9/4
The gameplay in this level is overall good, but the end is much harder than the beginning and you can skip the robot portal. However, those two things only decrease this score by a little bit.
Design: 2.5/4
The design here is fairly good, a bit unique, but needs a lot of polishing. It does, however, have some potential.
Music Sync: 0.5/2
There is very little music sync in this level. That needs to be fixed.
Originality: 1.1x
It's pretty original but I've seen the general idea of some of the designs before.
Total score: 6.49 = Good
This puts your level in Rank 5 of 6
(out of the levels I have reviewed)
Good luck on your next level!
The level leaderboard and more information about how I judge can be found here.
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280 posts
Favorite Level: Deadlocked
Hardest Demon: e6a419
Mini-Profile Background: 19e69c
Mini-Profile Name Color: {"image":"","color":"46236e"}
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Post by . on May 10, 2016 23:31:53 GMT -5
I'm not a level judge, but I still want to try and review some levels in hopes of becoming one, so here's a review:
Gameplay: 2.9/4
The gameplay in this level is overall good, but the end is much harder than the beginning and you can skip the robot portal. However, those two things only decrease this score by a little bit.
Design: 2.5/4
The design here is fairly good, a bit unique, but needs a lot of polishing. It does, however, have some potential.
Music Sync: 0.5/2
There is very little music sync in this level. That needs to be fixed.
Originality: 1.1x
It's pretty original but I've seen the general idea of some of the designs before.
Total score: 6.49 = Good
This puts your level in Rank 5 of 6
(out of the levels I have reviewed)
Good luck on your next level!
The level leaderboard and more information about how I judge can be found here. You underrated music sync, just saying. If you didn't see, in the last part the flashes were pretty much syncing the music. Alx' part had decent sync, as same as my one. And you need to DETAIL your reviews more on what I have to polish. You just said "lots of polishing" and came away. And now I don't know how to improve! |
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Post by purplecoin777 on May 11, 2016 19:21:44 GMT -5
I'm not a level judge, but I still want to try and review some levels in hopes of becoming one, so here's a review:
Gameplay: 2.9/4
The gameplay in this level is overall good, but the end is much harder than the beginning and you can skip the robot portal. However, those two things only decrease this score by a little bit.
Design: 2.5/4
The design here is fairly good, a bit unique, but needs a lot of polishing. It does, however, have some potential.
Music Sync: 0.5/2
There is very little music sync in this level. That needs to be fixed.
Originality: 1.1x
It's pretty original but I've seen the general idea of some of the designs before.
Total score: 6.49 = Good
This puts your level in Rank 5 of 6
(out of the levels I have reviewed)
Good luck on your next level!
The level leaderboard and more information about how I judge can be found here. You underrated music sync, just saying. If you didn't see, in the last part the flashes were pretty much syncing the music. Alx' part had decent sync, as same as my one. And you need to DETAIL your reviews more on what I have to polish. You just said "lots of polishing" and came away. And now I don't know how to improve! Thanks for the review review, and I've been told this on my old reviews multiple times. I am starting to make my reviews more detailed and I am starting to add specific references to the parts in the level. Here are some suggestions for things I think you could change. [ 0:00 - 0:10 ] I think you should remove the rainbows here, they look a little weird compared to the rest of the level. [ 0:11 - 0:30 ] The flashes and form changes here are not very well synced with the level. Some are, but they are still around 0.5 seconds off, which really throws off the music sync rating. Also, I really liked the disco flashes and the way you flashed the colours here, that looks amazing, just sync it with the music please :3 [ 0:22 - 0:27 ] My favourite part of the level. Excellently done. [ 0:30 - 0:33 ] This part is almost synced to the music, but it is a little off and if you were to fix that, it would look really nice. [ 0:33 - 0:42 ] I really like the design here with the hexagons, but I think you should sync the hexagons flashing to the music. [ 0:54 ] Make it fade to black instead of switch to black instantly. [ 0:54 - 1:00 ] I think this part would look really nice if you made the text flash or move with move triggers in tune with the music. Once again, thanks for the feedback on my feedback. :3 |
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2016 6:43:24 GMT -5
I'm not a level judge, but I still want to try and review some levels in hopes of becoming one, so here's a review:
Gameplay: 2.9/4
The gameplay in this level is overall good, but the end is much harder than the beginning and you can skip the robot portal. However, those two things only decrease this score by a little bit.
Design: 2.5/4
The design here is fairly good, a bit unique, but needs a lot of polishing. It does, however, have some potential.
Music Sync: 0.5/2
There is very little music sync in this level. That needs to be fixed.
Originality: 1.1x
It's pretty original but I've seen the general idea of some of the designs before.
Total score: 6.49 = Good
This puts your level in Rank 5 of 6
(out of the levels I have reviewed)
Good luck on your next level!
The level leaderboard and more information about how I judge can be found here. You underrated music sync, just saying. If you didn't see, in the last part the flashes were pretty much syncing the music. Alx' part had decent sync, as same as my one. And you need to DETAIL your reviews more on what I have to polish. You just said "lots of polishing" and came away. And now I don't know how to improve! Thanks for the review review, and I've been told this on my old reviews multiple times. I am starting to make my reviews more detailed and I am starting to add specific references to the parts in the level. Here are some suggestions for things I think you could change. [ 0:00 - 0:10 ] I think you should remove the rainbows here, they look a little weird compared to the rest of the level. [ 0:11 - 0:30 ] The flashes and form changes here are not very well synced with the level. Some are, but they are still around 0.5 seconds off, which really throws off the music sync rating. Also, I really liked the disco flashes and the way you flashed the colours here, that looks amazing, just sync it with the music please :3 [ 0:22 - 0:27 ] My favourite part of the level. Excellently done. [ 0:30 - 0:33 ] This part is almost synced to the music, but it is a little off and if you were to fix that, it would look really nice. [ 0:33 - 0:42 ] I really like the design here with the hexagons, but I think you should sync the hexagons flashing to the music. [ 0:54 ] Make it fade to black instead of switch to black instantly. [ 0:54 - 1:00 ] I think this part would look really nice if you made the text flash or move with move triggers in tune with the music. Once again, thanks for the feedback on my feedback. :3 Combining both of your "reviews"(would be much better if you just did that on one single post every time you review, so it'll be detailed enough.), approved. Definitely should be rated. But I do think that you underrated some things, and this should be in Feature Worthy, so... Moving. |
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Post by purplecoin777 on May 12, 2016 18:38:20 GMT -5
Combining both of your "reviews"(would be much better if you just did that on one single post every time you review, so it'll be detailed enough.), approved. Definitely should be rated. But I do think that you underrated some things, and this should be in Feature Worthy, so... Moving. Opinions are opinions. Also, my newer reviews are going to be more detailed, I just had them in two separate posts here since this was an old, not detailed review, and I was simply responding to the creator of a level by adding suggestions.  |
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