Back home, let's do another review
Gameplay - To be honest, the gameplay is far from great. I assume that it wasn't the main focus of the level (probably the design was), but you still need to have good gameplay to make your levels more enjoyable . At the first cube-part, there isnt alot of variation in the jumps. The cube is always hard to vary, but instead of just jumping on those 1 thick pillars, try to do some orbs, spikes, gears, maybe slopes, or even slowly moving objects. At the flying part (20%), the gameplay isnt that fun either. It exists of 'straight' flying through slowley moving gears, but there isn't any variation in pressing the button at all. And in the wave and ufo it is pretty much the same. If you make sure you are staying in the middle, you only have to dodge like one or two gears and its done. The ball part isn't that much better either. You have to just switch gravity at the same heights, no orbs, no slopes, and you can even skip most of the spikes.
Score for gameplay: 1.5/4
Design - The design however is quite well done
The whole level has a design that fits well onto each other but everything still has some variation, and it looks good too (I especially like the looks of the ball part). All the designs you used are dynamic, which is great too. The points of critic I have on the design are at the cube and wave (54%) part. The cube part has a good background, but the pillars just don't look that good, they are a bit plain and the pattern you made is a bit to outstanding. At the wave part, it feels like the whole design relys at the frame you made around it and the background animation you used, but besides that it is quite plain too.
Score for design: 3/4
Music sync - In terms of gameplay I wouldn't really say its music synced, as there isn't really gameplay. With a bit of imagination you could say that the first cube part is synced with the music, but you could've done way more with it. In terms of design sync however, the dynamic things you used in your designs are synced to the music. Which is a really good point in my opinion.
Score for gameplay: 1/2
Originality x0.80 - I decided to look up astortion, as this is a V2 to look how original this level was. And I was shocked. You basically copied the level, changed some minor things and in some parts changed a background or something, but most of this level just isn't your creation. I feel like I have been judging another level. (and x0.80 because I can't go lower in my scores :3)
final score: 4.4/12, putting 'you' at decent levels. The main point to get better at is gameplay, which could bring this level up to 7.9/12. And please, a V2 isn't bad, but this is just too much V2.
