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Post by purplecoin777 on May 3, 2016 23:44:06 GMT -5
8o = Eighto, 3a = Tria. ID: 19435394 Feedback would be appreciated  |
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Post by Lumpy on May 21, 2016 23:00:50 GMT -5
This is a review of: 3a by Purplegaze
Gameplay(2/4): You did a good job of keeping the level very bug free and smooth! There is no confusion of where to go, or unnecessary fake things, which is good. However, it gets quite a bit repetitive, even for an easy level. The first ship part was oversimplified, and the auto part in the ball was not necessary, its kind of boring to just sit there and do nothing. At the drop, it would've been better if it wasn't avoiding sparkles for so long. Finally, you should make sure the teleport transition to the last ship doesn't kill people unexpectedly (like it did to me!) by adding some platforms above and below, so players can see where they are before obstacles come.
Decoration(2.25/3): Although the decoration overall was rather simplistic, its very nice because its not messy! The rainbow pixelated design in the first part works really well, and the pixel art looks really good! The moving blocks in the ball part looks cool too. After the drop, I think you should've added more than just 1 custom background and sparkles to avoid (although the background does look good: nice colors). Finally, the last ship could use a bit more decoration.
Musical Affinity(1.25/3): This part of the level was kind of mediocre to me. Its nice that the mode changes were synced with a music, and the ball part was synced to the notes. But otherwise the gameplay it kind of separate from the music, its usually more fun to play a level if the notes of the melody of the song are with what the gameplay is. And in my opinion the drop was a little bit slow for being intense dubstep, but if that makes it too hard I guess its fine as is.
Overall(5.5/10): Of most levels posted on this forum, yours is slightly about average to me. This puts it in decent, which means I think it deserves at least a star rating. Good job :D make sure to work on non-repetitive gameplay and music synced in the next one
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Post by kiriE on Jun 1, 2016 13:00:29 GMT -5
This is a review of: 3a by PurplegazeGameplay(2/4): You did a good job of keeping the level very bug free and smooth! There is no confusion of where to go, or unnecessary fake things, which is good. However, it gets quite a bit repetitive, even for an easy level. The first ship part was oversimplified, and the auto part in the ball was not necessary, its kind of boring to just sit there and do nothing. At the drop, it would've been better if it wasn't avoiding sparkles for so long. Finally, you should make sure the teleport transition to the last ship doesn't kill people unexpectedly (like it did to me!) by adding some platforms above and below, so players can see where they are before obstacles come. Decoration(2.25/3): Although the decoration overall was rather simplistic, its very nice because its not messy! The rainbow pixelated design in the first part works really well, and the pixel art looks really good! The moving blocks in the ball part looks cool too. After the drop, I think you should've added more than just 1 custom background and sparkles to avoid (although the background does look good: nice colors). Finally, the last ship could use a bit more decoration. Musical Affinity(1.25/3): This part of the level was kind of mediocre to me. Its nice that the mode changes were synced with a music, and the ball part was synced to the notes. But otherwise the gameplay it kind of separate from the music, its usually more fun to play a level if the notes of the melody of the song are with what the gameplay is. And in my opinion the drop was a little bit slow for being intense dubstep, but if that makes it too hard I guess its fine as is. Overall(5.5/10): Of most levels posted on this forum, yours is slightly about average to me. This puts it in decent, which means I think it deserves at least a star rating. Good job  make sure to work on non-repetitive gameplay and music synced in the next one Excellent review as always, agree with all the points, moving to decent levels. However, I think this is high-end decent. Level Mod Suggestion:  3 - No Feature, Star-Worthy |
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make sure to work on non-repetitive gameplay and music synced in the next one