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Post by MicrowaveGMD on May 3, 2016 11:04:18 GMT -5
This is mainly meant to be a sequel to "Fantasy by Adiaul". Took like 4 days to make...
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3 Star, pwease? ????
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Post by Igno on May 3, 2016 13:23:30 GMT -5
Pretty good level! Nice job, dude!  The only things I don't like are 1) you didn't use much (or any) blending, which kinda looks bad especially where the deco covers up the monsters and obstacles, 2) the layering of the moving objects at the beginning looks lazy because the obstacles are on top of the blocks, 3) the block combos don't vary much at all, and in some parts you used a certain type of brick that has a border around every single block and it just looks kinda weird. Other than that, pretty good! The gameplay is not cancerous; in fact, it's pretty good! I'd give the deco a 6.5/10. Needs some work (i.e. blending and stuff); the gameplay: 8/10, noice!  Overall, I'd rate the level a 7/10. It would be feature-worthy if you changed the deco to blending. Just update the level.  |
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Post by MicrowaveGMD on May 3, 2016 14:04:45 GMT -5
Ok  Thanks for your advice |
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Post by MicrowaveGMD on May 3, 2016 14:22:56 GMT -5
Pretty good level! Nice job, dude! The only things I don't like are 1) you didn't use much (or any) blending, which kinda looks bad especially where the deco covers up the monsters and obstacles, 2) the layering of the moving objects at the beginning looks lazy because the obstacles are on top of the blocks, 3) the block combos don't vary much at all, and in some parts you used a certain type of brick that has a border around every single block and it just looks kinda weird. Other than that, pretty good! The gameplay is not cancerous; in fact, it's pretty good! I'd give the deco a 6.5/10. Needs some work (i.e. blending and stuff); the gameplay: 8/10, noice! Overall, I'd rate the level a 7/10. It would be feature-worthy if you changed the deco to blending. Just update the level. Done but i cant upload it because the server is Down.. Maybe 2.1 idk but i changed a few things |
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Post by Deleted on May 12, 2016 6:39:24 GMT -5
Gameplay: Really fun and varied! Almost no bugs anywhere. However, the transition from dual to final ship(and the final ship in general) is a bit annoying and a bit unpredictable, so you should probably fix that or make the portals visible. 3.4/5 Decoration: Nice colour usage, flashes and detail, there isn't really an empty spot in the level! But... here are some problems: Problem 1(It's an imgur link.), Problem 2: This may be a small detail, but it is quite crucial: some, or all cornerpieces are missing. It kinda annoys me... Problem 3: Torches look copied/pasted, with no variety... Try changing the size of some. But other than that, it's pretty good. Simple, nice, all around cool. BUT, however, there are cutoffs before the first UFO and after. Try fixing them. 2.6/5 Originality: From what I can see, this style is copied from Adiale. Also the decorational ideas are kinda overused these days, so... 1.3/5 Atmosphere: Kinda fun, and almost not one bland moment in the level. But that can still be improved, try adding pulsing objects or something, add more blending, I don't really know... (By the way, note the underlined "Kinda".) 2.3/5 Music Sync: Pretty decent, quite nice. No problems here. 4.7/5 Bonus Points: None awarded. 0/5 Total score is 14.3/5 or 57.2/120. Belongs in Decent Levels section.
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Post by MicrowaveGMD on May 21, 2016 4:38:06 GMT -5
Gameplay: Really fun and varied! Almost no bugs anywhere. However, the transition from dual to final ship(and the final ship in general) is a bit annoying and a bit unpredictable, so you should probably fix that or make the portals visible. 3.4/5 Decoration: Nice colour usage, flashes and detail, there isn't really an empty spot in the level! But... here are some problems: Problem 1(It's an imgur link.), Problem 2: This may be a small detail, but it is quite crucial: some, or all cornerpieces are missing. It kinda annoys me... Problem 3: Torches look copied/pasted, with no variety... Try changing the size of some. But other than that, it's pretty good. Simple, nice, all around cool. BUT, however, there are cutoffs before the first UFO and after. Try fixing them. 2.6/5 Originality: From what I can see, this style is copied from Adiale. Also the decorational ideas are kinda overused these days, so... 1.3/5 Atmosphere: Kinda fun, and almost not one bland moment in the level. But that can still be improved, try adding pulsing objects or something, add more blending, I don't really know... (By the way, note the underlined "Kinda".) 2.3/5 Music Sync: Pretty decent, quite nice. No problems here. 4.7/5 Bonus Points: None awarded. 0/5 Total score is 14.3/5 or 57.2/120. Belongs in Decent Levels section. Thank you for your honesty  so in your looks of it, the level is no star worthy nor feature and I'm cool with that. but I still don't understand the imgur pic. I used blending on everything... but I respect you. |
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2016 4:43:10 GMT -5
Gameplay: Really fun and varied! Almost no bugs anywhere. However, the transition from dual to final ship(and the final ship in general) is a bit annoying and a bit unpredictable, so you should probably fix that or make the portals visible. 3.4/5 Decoration: Nice colour usage, flashes and detail, there isn't really an empty spot in the level! But... here are some problems: Problem 1(It's an imgur link.), Problem 2: This may be a small detail, but it is quite crucial: some, or all cornerpieces are missing. It kinda annoys me... Problem 3: Torches look copied/pasted, with no variety... Try changing the size of some. But other than that, it's pretty good. Simple, nice, all around cool. BUT, however, there are cutoffs before the first UFO and after. Try fixing them. 2.6/5 Originality: From what I can see, this style is copied from Adiale. Also the decorational ideas are kinda overused these days, so... 1.3/5 Atmosphere: Kinda fun, and almost not one bland moment in the level. But that can still be improved, try adding pulsing objects or something, add more blending, I don't really know... (By the way, note the underlined "Kinda".) 2.3/5 Music Sync: Pretty decent, quite nice. No problems here. 4.7/5 Bonus Points: None awarded. 0/5 Total score is 14.3/5 or 57.2/120. Belongs in Decent Levels section. Thank you for your honesty so in your looks of it, the level is no star worthy nor feature and I'm cool with that. but I still don't understand the imgur pic. I used blending on everything... but I respect you. The imgur link was about the stars. They need some blending. |
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Post by MicrowaveGMD on Jul 3, 2016 7:53:40 GMT -5
The imgur link was about the stars. They need some blending. But is it sar worthy? I tried so hard making that level and updated more than 10 times... All i need is one CP... |
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Thanks for your advice 
so in your looks of it, the level is no star worthy nor feature and I'm cool with that. but I still don't understand the imgur pic. I used blending on everything... but I respect you.