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Post by Cheeseguy on May 2, 2016 16:16:59 GMT -5
Name: Intense Melody Id:19471700 by: Cheeseguy(me) Video:
I hope it gets sent to robtop ;-;
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Post by Retired moderator. on May 2, 2016 19:07:34 GMT -5
Gameplay: the transition at 6% is pretty cheap and gives the player no time to react to the saw right after the transition.
The shaking at 14% were also a bit cheap.
The fake at 66% is also very cheap and nearly requires a death at that spot.
You can skip the speed portal at 91% by holding.
Other than the things I just mentioned, the gameplay is decent. Not too buggy and pretty creative in some parts like the dual ball.
The decorations were pretty good as well. The level is very consistent in terms of decorations which is a good thing. The block variety was pretty good and the custom backgrounds are simple but creative and good looking.
Gameplay: 7/10 Decorations: 9/10
Borderline feature worthy for me.
I'll wait for another review before moving it.
@judges
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Post by Cheeseguy on May 2, 2016 19:58:29 GMT -5
Gameplay: the transition at 6% is pretty cheap and gives the player no time to react to the saw right after the transition. The shaking at 14% were also a bit cheap. The fake at 66% is also very cheap and nearly requires a death at that spot. You can skip the speed portal at 91% by holding. Other than the things I just mentioned, the gameplay is decent. Not too buggy and pretty creative in some parts like the dual ball. The decorations were pretty good as well. The level is very consistent in terms of decorations which is a good thing. The block variety was pretty good and the custom backgrounds are simple but creative and good looking. Gameplay: 7/10 Decorations: 9/10 Borderline feature worthy for me. I'll wait for another review before moving it. I'll fix the transition at 6% (maybe add some invisible platforms) and i'll fix the speed portal bug. Thanks for reviewing
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Post by kiriE on May 4, 2016 15:00:04 GMT -5
All in all this is a pretty cool level with nice designs and decent gameplay. I don't have time to make a very big review, but here's something at least: Design: This level has very nice design and as Ian mentioned it's very consistent and doesn't really lack of decoration in any part. It keeps a theme throughout the entirety of the level and has creative block designs and really good color combinations as well. Watch out for incomplete transitions like 0:21 though, you must remember to fill in with blocks above. This also goes for the transitions at 0:48 and 0:51. Also try not to have so many invisible blocks like at the transition at 6%, not is it just confusing, but also it looks pretty ugly. Other examples are: 0:20, the coin at 0:13 and 0:25. Try reduce copy+paste at some parts also like the block segments at 0:18 - 0:20 (but that is not a big problem in this level). Other than that design is pretty nice and in my opinion definitely feature-worthy! Gameplay: The gameplay is decent. It's all in all pretty fun, but the first attempts I found it very confusing and also unfair. Some transitions don't give the time enough time to react like the transition at 6% Ian mentioned. Other unexpected transitions are at: 0:19 (because it's very confusing how many times you need to click here in the transition), 0:34 (the ball part comes very fast at you here), 0:51 (do you really need to make speed changes invisible??). Also the effects at 0:16 is very nice since it syncs to the music, but it affects the gameplay quite a bit making it very frustrating. Try not to use moving blocks in a pattern like that. Also try to avoid super-tinty teeny invisible spikes like the ones at 0:23, 0:31. Also effects like the very unexpectable sawblades at 0:12 and the effects at 0:42 felt kinda unnecessary. Other than that the gameplay is very nice, especially the duals is very fun one you've learnt them! Music sync: You did an awesome job here, great job! It syncs very nice to the music and is very fun to play. Transitions are also very nice synced. Originality: This level uses some creative and really cool blocks designs with very nice color combinations and cool gameplay. This wasn't Funny Game originality, but still the level isn't the worst when it comes to this point. Good job. Overall Score: 8.5/10 - Very nice level with awesome design and decent gameplay. Keep up the good work! Low-end Feature-worthy for me, gameplay takes the score down. (I take the moving responsibility to an other judge)FEATURE-WORTHYRetired moderator. Cheeseguy
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Post by Cheeseguy on May 4, 2016 18:03:43 GMT -5
All in all this is a pretty cool level with nice designs and decent gameplay. I don't have time to make a very big review, but here's something at least: Design: This level has very nice design and as Ian mentioned it's very consistent and doesn't really lack of decoration in any part. It keeps a theme throughout the entirety of the level and has creative block designs and really good color combinations as well. Watch out for incomplete transitions like 0:21 though, you must remember to fill in with blocks above. This also goes for the transitions at 0:48 and 0:51. Also try not to have so many invisible blocks like at the transition at 6%, not is it just confusing, but also it looks pretty ugly. Other examples are: 0:20, the coin at 0:13 and 0:25. Try reduce copy+paste at some parts also like the block segments at 0:18 - 0:20 (but that is not a big problem in this level). Other than that design is pretty nice and in my opinion definitely feature-worthy! Gameplay: The gameplay is decent. It's all in all pretty fun, but the first attempts I found it very confusing and also unfair. Some transitions don't give the time enough time to react like the transition at 6% Ian mentioned. Other unexpected transitions are at: 0:19 (because it's very confusing how many times you need to click here in the transition), 0:34 (the ball part comes very fast at you here), 0:51 (do you really need to make speed changes invisible??). Also the effects at 0:16 is very nice since it syncs to the music, but it affects the gameplay quite a bit making it very frustrating. Try not to use moving blocks in a pattern like that. Also try to avoid super-tinty teeny invisible spikes like the ones at 0:23, 0:31. Also effects like the very unexpectable sawblades at 0:12 and the effects at 0:42 felt kinda unnecessary. Other than that the gameplay is very nice, especially the duals is very fun one you've learnt them! Music sync: You did an awesome job here, great job! It syncs very nice to the music and is very fun to play. Transitions are also very nice synced. Originality: This level uses some creative and really cool blocks designs with very nice color combinations and cool gameplay. This wasn't Funny Game originality, but still the level isn't the worst when it comes to this point. Good job. Overall Score: 8.5/10 - Very nice level with awesome design and decent gameplay. Keep up the good work! Low-end Feature-worthy for me, gameplay takes the score down. (I take the moving responsibility to an other judge)FEATURE-WORTHYRetired moderator. Cheeseguy I completely agree with you about the first parts. Those were made 4 months ago while the rest of it was made within the last week... So I guess i've improved . Anyways thanks for the review! I'll definitely use your suggestions!
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Post by Deleted on May 4, 2016 19:55:05 GMT -5
8/10 decent
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Post by Mechanguis on May 5, 2016 4:55:22 GMT -5
I agree with the two other reviews here. Moving to Feature-Worthy
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Post by megaman9 on May 9, 2016 13:01:37 GMT -5
I like your musical taste ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Sent as 6* Featured
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Post by Retired moderator. on May 9, 2016 13:03:11 GMT -5
I like your musical taste ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Sent as 6* Featured But this song is trash though. Kappa blue version is infinitely better
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Post by megaman9 on May 9, 2016 13:04:06 GMT -5
I like your musical taste ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Sent as 6* Featured But this song is trash though. Kappa blue version is infinitely better That song takes some getting used to. But I agree that the blue version is better
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Post by Cheeseguy on May 9, 2016 20:27:59 GMT -5
I like your musical taste ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Sent as 6* Featured Yay thank you so much!
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Post by Cheeseguy on Jul 5, 2016 22:14:46 GMT -5
megaman9 Hey... So the level never go rated even though u sent it in ;(. You think maybe u could send it again?
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Post by kiriE on Jul 6, 2016 4:31:16 GMT -5
megaman9 Hey... So the level never go rated even though u sent it in ;(. You think maybe u could send it again? Hey, I know how you feel, I've also been waiting for over a month. Rob doesn't rate much levels lately however, so I'm pretty sure he will get to your level eventually
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Post by Cheeseguy on Jul 6, 2016 9:46:51 GMT -5
megaman9 Hey... So the level never go rated even though u sent it in ;(. You think maybe u could send it again? Hey, I know how you feel, I've also been waiting for over a month. Rob doesn't rate much levels lately however, so I'm pretty sure he will get to your level eventually Hopefully lol... I've just reached the 2 month mark for mine
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Post by kiriE on Jul 6, 2016 10:57:37 GMT -5
Hey, I know how you feel, I've also been waiting for over a month. Rob doesn't rate much levels lately however, so I'm pretty sure he will get to your level eventually Hopefully lol... I've just reached the 2 month mark for mine Aaaw that sucks xd Oh yeah, I even reviewed this level lol, it's very good, I hope Rob rates/features it soon!
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