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Violet
Apr 28, 2016 10:00:59 GMT -5
Post by b1n4ry on Apr 28, 2016 10:00:59 GMT -5
So I just made a level
It's for Olympic's creator contest.
The effects are obviously inspired by Serponge, TriAxis, Olympic and more
The deadline is at 2 days so I had to finish this fast before the contest ends.
ID: 19320779
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Post by benjaminstrike on Apr 28, 2016 12:01:19 GMT -5
The name is not original  |
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Violet
Apr 28, 2016 18:28:24 GMT -5
Post by ·Goosey· on Apr 28, 2016 18:28:24 GMT -5
Looks good, but gameplay sucks
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Violet
Apr 28, 2016 22:04:50 GMT -5
Post by Space on Apr 28, 2016 22:04:50 GMT -5
Alright.. Prepare for my first level review..........
Please keep that in mind, as well as the fact that I myself
Design: The design, in my opinion, background-wise, isn't all that great in the beginning. It looks cool, but it doesn't really go with the music too well in the cube part. The blocks look really cool with the background, though, but they are obviously copied and paste.
The ship part looks pretty cool. I love the background, and the movement of the blocks looks fun. There's not really much else to say here, those are the only two designs.
The UFO part is my favorite part. I absolutely love the laser effect, which goes with the beat. The decoration on the blocks look really cool, as well as the tiles themselves. The colors really match the music, too.
In that last cube part, it bonestly looks a little messy. The background, with the music thing and the rings, looks awesome, but the blocks are really hard to see. The pulse is cool, and the parallax is a nice addition.
Overall, the design gets a (6/10).
Gameplay: Meh. The level isn't that fun to play, except for the UFO part. The first cube part is just boring. I don't understand the saved-your-life! portals there, either, like when you miss a ring, it still puts you in the right place. And the ship part is really repetitive, though kind of fun to figure out. The last cube part is hard to predict, making it really hard, and the jumps seem off.
The UFO part is still young favorite, however. It was fun to play and try *not* to die.
Overall, gameplay gets a (1.8/10)
Music synchronization: The music sync isn't the worst I've seen, but not the best either. The beginning cube sync is good at some parts, but in most of it, it is pushing it, and the invisible portals desync it. And I'm sorry, but the ship part isn't synced at all. Even the transition on UFO is slightly off, though it was cool. The UFO part is pretty well synced, I mean, it is hard to sync the UFO. The last cube part is almost as bad as the ship part.
Overall sync gets (1/10)
Overall, this level isn't way too bad, but it Needs Improvement.
Total score: (2.93/10)
I hope I wasn't too harsh in making this review. It is my first, but I examined the level carefully to make it. It is difficult to make sure I'm not too harsh but also not too easy.
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Violet
Apr 29, 2016 4:56:08 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 29, 2016 4:56:08 GMT -5
Oh no! I have competition for the CC! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Anyways, decided to review this because I kinda disagree with Space 's review. First Cube: Kinda irritating to the eye, and the custom background is really borderline bad/decent... Gameplay is decent. Pretty synced too. Ship: You have no idea when you'll drop down, so that's a problem. However, the effects are nice. Not very original though... To be honest, couldn't hear much sync here except for the transition to UFO... UFO: Beautiful but simple design! Amazing custom background that really just wows you. The transition isn't hard to predict. To be honest though, not really synced either, but the gameplay's decent. Still not very original with the design... Second Cube: A bit too sudden, and the design looks a bit messy... Effects are copied straight from Echolocation... Horrible gameplay too, it's hard to predict invisible portals at this speed... Overall ReviewGameplay: Kinda decent, can be improved a lot, as said above. 2.1/5 Decoration: Nice effects, but the second cube can be improved a lot though... Other than that, I have no other complaints, to be honest. Do wish the first part wasn't so irritating to the eye though. :/ 3.8/5 Originality: Where's the originality? Down the drain. Sadly, this awesome level doesn't have much original points... 0.7/5 Atmosphere: Genuinely happy in most parts, but the cube part is just stressful, and kinda annoying... 2.6/5 Music Sync: Borderline bad... 1.3/5 Bonus Points: None awarded. 0/5 Total score is 10.5/30 or 42/120. Belongs in Decent Levels section.  |
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Violet
Apr 29, 2016 5:35:17 GMT -5
Post by kiriE on Apr 29, 2016 5:35:17 GMT -5
Oh no! I have competition for the CC! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Anyways, decided to review this because I kinda disagree with Space 's review. First Cube: Kinda irritating to the eye, and the custom background is really borderline bad/decent... Gameplay is decent. Pretty synced too. Ship: You have no idea when you'll drop down, so that's a problem. However, the effects are nice. Not very original though... To be honest, couldn't hear much sync here except for the transition to UFO... UFO: Beautiful but simple design! Amazing custom background that really just wows you. The transition isn't hard to predict. To be honest though, not really synced either, but the gameplay's decent. Still not very original with the design... Second Cube: A bit too sudden, and the design looks a bit messy... Effects are copied straight from Echolocation... Horrible gameplay too, it's hard to predict invisible portals at this speed... Overall ReviewGameplay: Kinda decent, can be improved a lot, as said above. 2.1/5 Decoration: Nice effects, but the second cube can be improved a lot though... Other than that, I have no other complaints, to be honest. Do wish the first part wasn't so irritating to the eye though. :/ 3.8/5 Originality: Where's the originality? Down the drain. Sadly, this awesome level doesn't have much original points... 0.7/5 Atmosphere: Genuinely happy in most parts, but the cube part is just stressful, and kinda annoying... 2.6/5 Music Sync: Borderline bad... 1.3/5 Bonus Points: None awarded. 0/5 Total score is 10.5/30 or 42/120. Belongs in Decent Levels section. Approved, moving to decent |
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