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Trauma
Apr 17, 2016 7:03:29 GMT -5
Post by b1n4ry on Apr 17, 2016 7:03:29 GMT -5
My new level! I tried to use less invisible portals this time! I also tried to make some flashing earthquake effect  ID: 18991892  2  please! kiriE ? |
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Trauma
Apr 17, 2016 8:32:30 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2016 8:32:30 GMT -5
Gameplay: Quite nice, you have truly listened to our reviews! The transitions are so much better! Good job! But the rest of the gameplay were really quite average though. You should check out TamaN's levels for inspiration on gameplay, he makes great levels. 3.7/5 Decoration: Really nice custom backgrounds! Still horrible block design though, and where are the cornerpieces here?! (Look closely, no cornerpieces :c) And the background here could be more... varied. Try different sizes and shades? The custom backgrounds could have varied more, maybe add smaller pieces and stars to go with it. Other than that, big improvement from your previous levels. 2.9/5 Originality: Wasn't very original... Just looks like a bad remake of BURST in most parts... 1.4/5 Atmosphere: Quite bland... No thanks... 0.9/5 Music Sync: Quite nicely synced in most parts, could be improved at the beginning though! 3.9/5 Bonus Points: Awarded for taking our advice and making the transitions HEAPS better! 2/5 Total score is 14.8/30 or 59.2/120. Belongs in Decent Levels section. |
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Trauma
Apr 17, 2016 9:52:41 GMT -5
Post by Lumpy on Apr 17, 2016 9:52:41 GMT -5
Review approved, moved to Decent! Your gameplay is much better than before :) However, I'd like to add that the level doesn't really have enough decoration. Only blocks and a custom background usually aren't enough, I think you should reduce the opacity of the custom backgrounds a little bit and add some foreground decorations. Try arrows, pulsing trails, chains, whatever looks good.
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