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Wake
Apr 14, 2016 3:33:28 GMT -5
Post by b1n4ry on Apr 14, 2016 3:33:28 GMT -5
My new level! My most original one? ID: 18879283  2  ? kiriE ? |
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Wake
Apr 14, 2016 5:22:42 GMT -5
Post by VegetarianBacon on Apr 14, 2016 5:22:42 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10
Decoration: 8.5/10
Creativity: 9/10
Originality: 9/10
Music Sync: 9.5/10
Overall average: 8.8
The deco is pretty good, just make sure to add a little more in some places, like the second part where there are the doors in the background. Also, I would remake the windmill in the beginning. It doesn't look high-end enough. Great level though! I would consider this feature-worthy!
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Wake
Apr 14, 2016 6:15:19 GMT -5
Post by b1n4ry on Apr 14, 2016 6:15:19 GMT -5
~Pear~ approve this review please
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Wake
Apr 14, 2016 6:25:40 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2016 6:25:40 GMT -5
You told me I was spoiling the review by speaking out my honest opinion in the shoutbox, so does it count as spoiling if I said it here? (° ͜ʖ°) And anyways I strongly disagree with VegetarianBacon 's review. So here's mine. Gameplay: Awkward at the start... And boring throughout the level. Please work on the gameplay more, I see potential in this level. 1.2/5 Decoration: Bland and terrible block design. Really good custom backgrounds though! Work at it more! However, I cannot forgive how there was NO VARIETY on the block design. Nice touch at the end though. 2.1/5 Originality: Quite original hotel custom BG, but nothing else was original. 2.3/5 Atmosphere: Really... bland... kinda boring... Unenjoyable... 0.1/5 Music Sync: Nonexistent at the start. Gets better in the cube, but only by a little. Then it fades out of existence again at the 2nd part of the cube sequence. 0.2/5 Bonus Points: None awarded. -/5 Total score is 5.9/30 or 23.6/120. Belongs in Bad Levels/Needs Improvement section. |
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Wake
Apr 14, 2016 6:52:54 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 14, 2016 6:52:54 GMT -5
Gameplay: Is pretty mediocre nothing too special, but also not too bad. You could work on the music sync doe 7/10
Design: The beginning was really ankward and i got several wtf diseases from this. Gets way better afterwards, but a bit repetive 8/10
Atmosphere: didnt really feel it 1/5
Other stuff: It felt a bit unpolished to me and its almost too short 3/5
Bias Points: 1 cus of song
20/30 Points -> Decent/Good
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Wake
Apr 14, 2016 8:44:13 GMT -5
Post by kiriE on Apr 14, 2016 8:44:13 GMT -5
Gameplay: 8/10 Decoration: 8.5/10 Creativity: 9/10 Originality: 9/10 Music Sync: 9.5/10 Overall average: 8.8 The deco is pretty good, just make sure to add a little more in some places, like the second part where there are the doors in the background. Also, I would remake the windmill in the beginning. It doesn't look high-end enough. Great level though! I would consider this feature-worthy! Please give explanations on pretty much everything and also you could've said a bit more on the block usage and design. Imo the block usage are too simple. You told me I was spoiling the review by speaking out my honest opinion in the shoutbox, so does it count as spoiling if I said it here? (° ͜ʖ°) And anyways I strongly disagree with VegetarianBacon 's review. So here's mine. Gameplay: Awkward at the start... And boring throughout the level. Please work on the gameplay more, I see potential in this level. 1.2/5 AgreedDecoration: Bland and terrible block design. Really good custom backgrounds though! Work at it more! However, I cannot forgive how there was NO VARIETY on the block design. Nice touch at the end though. 2.1/5 <- THIS. This is what takes the score harshly down.Originality: Quite original hotel custom BG, but nothing else was original. 2.3/5 AgreedAtmosphere: Really... bland... kinda boring... Unenjoyable... 0.1/5 Music Sync: Nonexistent at the start. Gets better in the cube, but only by a little. Then it fades out of existence again at the 2nd part of the cube sequence. 0.2/5 There is flashes though, but I do agree that it should've been more sync to the gameplay.Bonus Points: None awarded. -/5 Total score is 5.9/30 or 23.6/120. Belongs in Bad Levels/Needs Improvement section. Gameplay: Is pretty mediocre nothing too special, but also not too bad. You could work on the music sync doe 7/10 No, the gameplay wasn't really that good. It was boring and bland, no music sync as you mentioned either and it was hard to see at the first part because of all the glowing objects.Design: The beginning was really ankward and i got several wtf diseases from this. Gets way better afterwards, but a bit repetive 8/10 Agreed, but more like 6.5/10Atmosphere: didnt really feel it 1/5 Other stuff: It felt a bit unpolished to me and its almost too short 3/5 It is kinda too short, and I don't like that it ends at the drop.Bias Points: 1 cus of song Song is a bit overused, but I do agree that the song is awesome. That's why it was weird to end the level on the drop.20/30 Points -> Decent/Good Commented on all the three reviews in bold. Approved Ziel's critique completely (but not the rating  ), and I do agree partially with SkyBound and a bit with VB. The level is boring in terms of gameplay, you're right that you've made it more original than your last levels, but I still feel like the block usage needs a lot more creativity than this... Also at the very first part, either remove the foreground or make it visible. Music sync could definitely be improved. It's a decent from me because veen though the gameplay wasn't that good, the design was pretty original and unique. Moving to decent. Also here's a video : everyplay.com/videos/28129776 |
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), and I do agree partially with SkyBound and a bit with VB. The level is boring in terms of gameplay, you're right that you've made it more original than your last levels, but I still feel like the block usage needs a lot more creativity than this... Also at the very first part, either remove the foreground or make it visible. Music sync could definitely be improved. It's a decent from me because veen though the gameplay wasn't that good, the design was pretty original and unique. Moving to decent.