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Post by b1n4ry on Apr 8, 2016 23:28:29 GMT -5
My first real collab level! I made the first few parts and Klaux made the rest, we tried to make a space themed level, but it's pretty short because we reached the end of the song :/  6   9 or very easy  ? ID: 18701019 Can TheRealStevie make a video for me? |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 9, 2016 0:34:09 GMT -5
Gameplay: Really annoying in Klaux's parts, I recommend you to revise that part over. Other than that, it's good. 2.1/5
Decoration: The Earth was drawn badly, and the block design needs work. Perhaps experiment with block types? The first cube was nice though. Wish it was like that for the entire level. 2.8/5
Originality: No. There is nothing original here. 0.7/5
Atmosphere: Well, the only thing I can say is that I did not enjoy the level at all. Levels like A New Dawn by TamaN would get a high score on this, maybe try getting inspiration from that. 1.4/5
Music Sync: Bad after the first cube. Revise. 1.2/5
Total score is 8.2/25 or 32.8/100.
Belongs in Needs Improvement section.
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Post by Xedron on Apr 9, 2016 0:45:11 GMT -5
Gameplay: A few sections need some improvement. The idea with the moving blue orbs is cool, but it's pretty frustrating getting past all the gears and saws. There's also a bug where you can just keep jumping up and down to avoid hitting the blue orb. Besides this, not much unique ideas happen in the gameplay. Klaux's wave section could use some more work on it, because it's mini-wave type slopes making it harder to navigate through. Overall it's decent, but a few changes could make it much better.
Design: Yours was pretty unoriginal and Klaux's was pretty messy. One of the hard things about making a collab is getting a good design fit for both of the collab partners to complete easily. Tbh it doesn't really feel like you two's designs fit well enough for a collab. Your much more effect-based than he is, making the level feel a little inconsistent altogether. You have potential with effects, but you lack the creativity that some of the greats (funnygame, serponge, etc) have inside of their levels.
Originality: Besides the gravity ring concept, it was pretty unoriginal with the designs in the level.
Music sync: Could definitely use more of it, I didn't really see much sync even in the cube sections.
Overall: Decent/Needs Improvement
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Post by kiriE on Apr 9, 2016 5:40:00 GMT -5
Gameplay: Really annoying in Klaux's parts, I recommend you to revise that part over. Other than that, it's good. 2.1/5 Decoration: The Earth was drawn badly, and the block design needs work. Perhaps experiment with block types? The first cube was nice though. Wish it was like that for the entire level. 2.8/5 Originality: No. There is nothing original here. 0.7/5 Atmosphere: Well, the only thing I can say is that I did not enjoy the level at all. Levels like A New Dawn by TamaN would get a high score on this, maybe try getting inspiration from that. 1.4/5 Music Sync: Bad after the first cube. Revise. 1.2/5 Total score is 8.2/25 or 32.8/100. Belongs in Needs Improvement section. Gameplay: A few sections need some improvement. The idea with the moving blue orbs is cool, but it's pretty frustrating getting past all the gears and saws. There's also a bug where you can just keep jumping up and down to avoid hitting the blue orb. Besides this, not much unique ideas happen in the gameplay. Klaux's wave section could use some more work on it, because it's mini-wave type slopes making it harder to navigate through. Overall it's decent, but a few changes could make it much better. Design: Yours was pretty unoriginal and Klaux's was pretty messy. One of the hard things about making a collab is getting a good design fit for both of the collab partners to complete easily. Tbh it doesn't really feel like you two's designs fit well enough for a collab. Your much more effect-based than he is, making the level feel a little inconsistent altogether. You have potential with effects, but you lack the creativity that some of the greats (funnygame, serponge, etc) have inside of their levels. Originality: Besides the gravity ring concept, it was pretty unoriginal with the designs in the level. Music sync: Could definitely use more of it, I didn't really see much sync even in the cube sections. Overall: Decent/Needs Improvement Approved your critiques, but this is more of a high-end decent actually for me. Sure it maybe wasn't that original, but the design was still pretty nice and except for the annoying blue orb part the gameplay was pretty fun too. Music sync wasn't terrible, but not the best either, it was alright. Like that you synced the first part and also a lot of transitions were synced. Level is too short though and I do agree that the level needs some work as mentioned above. Moving this to decent. |
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