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Apr 1, 2016 22:27:02 GMT -5
Post by b1n4ry on Apr 1, 2016 22:27:02 GMT -5
New level  ID: 18501402 Song: Fractating by Mind-Portal Rate this:  2  or  4 |
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Apr 1, 2016 22:48:20 GMT -5
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Post by TheRealStevie on Apr 1, 2016 22:48:20 GMT -5
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Apr 1, 2016 22:55:18 GMT -5
Post by Xedron on Apr 1, 2016 22:55:18 GMT -5
Hey b1n4ry You need to work on your gameplay some more. There are lots of moments in the level that are either just annoying or not necessary. The moving spike idea in the beginning seemed cool, but becomes frustrating due to never knowing what will happen next. Just that turns this level into at LEAST a harder level. Also, try your best to limit the use of invisible portals, it almost always destroys the "fun" factor for players and can get annoying. The effects are suprisingly well done, however a large chunk of it was unoriginal and/or copied, so that brings down your score a lot. This actually may be your best work so far, just in the future work on your gameplay and originality some more  I'm gonna leave this at borderline Decent/Good, another judge can change the decision though. |
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Apr 2, 2016 0:51:15 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Apr 2, 2016 0:51:15 GMT -5
Here's a review. I'll try my best to not be harsh 8)
Gameplay: The beginning of the level was simply just annoying gameplay and memorisation. However, the gameplay becomes better as the level goes on, and, I can definitely tell you, I enjoyed it. 2.9/5
Decoration: Pretty good, but the block designs can be improved by a lot. Maybe don't use 100% pure black blocks next time. 2.4/5
Originality: Block design wasn't very original, and I can see that the ship section was copying Sightline, not to mention that the UFO section was copying a lot of levels. 1.8/5
Atmosphere: Cool. 3.1/5
Music Sync: Not very synced... 2.6/5
Total score is 12.8/25 or 51.2/100.
Belongs in Decent Levels.
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Apr 2, 2016 2:09:36 GMT -5
Post by thegamerpiggy on Apr 2, 2016 2:09:36 GMT -5
lol wow, nice level!
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Apr 10, 2016 4:30:12 GMT -5
Post by kiriE on Apr 10, 2016 4:30:12 GMT -5
Hey b1n4ry You need to work on your gameplay some more. There are lots of moments in the level that are either just annoying or not necessary. The moving spike idea in the beginning seemed cool, but becomes frustrating due to never knowing what will happen next. Just that turns this level into at LEAST a harder level. Also, try your best to limit the use of invisible portals, it almost always destroys the "fun" factor for players and can get annoying. The effects are suprisingly well done, however a large chunk of it was unoriginal and/or copied, so that brings down your score a lot. This actually may be your best work so far, just in the future work on your gameplay and originality some more I'm gonna leave this at borderline Decent/Good, another judge can change the decision though. Here's a review. I'll try my best to not be harsh 8) Gameplay: The beginning of the level was simply just annoying gameplay and memorisation. However, the gameplay becomes better as the level goes on, and, I can definitely tell you, I enjoyed it. 2.9/5 Decoration: Pretty good, but the block designs can be improved by a lot. Maybe don't use 100% pure black blocks next time. 2.4/5 Originality: Block design wasn't very original, and I can see that the ship section was copying Sightline, not to mention that the UFO section was copying a lot of levels. 1.8/5 Atmosphere: Cool. 3.1/5 Music Sync: Not very synced... 2.6/5 Total score is 12.8/25 or 51.2/100. Belongs in Decent Levels. Approved, gameplay and originality must be improved. Level looks too much alike Sightline and a bunch of other featured levels and too many invisible portals as well. But good news is, you're improving A LOT!  Very high-end decent for me. Moving to decent |
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Very high-end decent for me.