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Post by SpiderKing9 on Mar 7, 2016 10:24:15 GMT -5
15667167 - Pretty awesome and shiny level by Stdzul defenitely deserves the feutured! Video : www.youtube.com/watch?v=CGum3x2hd2wI Make level requests on my channel , request me whatever you want and i'll play it!
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Post by kiriE on Mar 21, 2016 11:17:22 GMT -5
Sorry for the tiny necro, but the alternative is to just have this level unreviewed for weeks :/ I'll review this now
Design: 6.9/10 0:03 - The biggest problem for this part is maybe the lines/the floor is not entirely the same color. Some parts of it is brighter than others, and it makes the part very weird. I have the same problem in my level and its very hard to fix, so I just suggest you should remove the white lines, and build them again. Also the square pulsing objects looks fine, but I think it's better when you only use them in the background and not where the gameplay is. I can see you tried to do this, but at 0:07 - 0:10 it looks weird :/ Moving block usage is nice though! The design is pretty cool and the colors are nice. Maybe add a bit more deco?
0:23 - Pleaaase don't use invisible blocks at the ground, it just looks weird :/ Stars are really cool though and nice deco, maybe even a bit more? 0:29 - fill everything with black blocks, I can see you haven't filled everything with black blocks. 0:37 fill everything here as well with black blocks so the transition doesn't look weird.
0:37 - meh, this part just looks lazy tbh. It's cool that you have this black bg which surrounds the player, but the part itself is very empty and the only deco is to the sawblades which is just copied over and over for 20 seconds :/
0:53 - Same here. The BG is pretty nice, but it's still not the best. Also the only obstacles which prevents this from auto is the satellites which is just copied over and over :/ Add more variations to this and the previous part!
1:21 - Invisible portals sucks... Make a teleportation portal. Also the last part is very empty but pretty cool looking. I suggest more deco. All in all the design is fine and with some adjustments and less laziness this would have been better. btw at 1:29, why do the deco which is locked to XY stop moving? That just makes it weird.
Music Sync: 5/10 - Some music sync I guess? Gameplay isn't very synced and especially not the second half! The transition from the first ball part to the rainbow parts sync was cool though and some of the other transitions were synced as well.
Originality: 6/10 - First part was original, the rest was not. Rainbow part, space part, meh. Some of the deco were pretty cool though!
Gameplay 6/10: The first 30 seconds the gameplay looked pretty good and fun. The UFO part looked hard to dodge the sawblades and not very fun. The space part as well only screamed "dodge this and this and this" and made the gameplay pretty uncreative and boring. Last part was alright.
Overall Score: 6/10 - Be even more original next time and you can improve a bit on all four things actually, I still think you can make feature-worthy levels with only some adjustments and improvements.
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Post by ~Pear~ on Mar 22, 2016 17:55:34 GMT -5
approved
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