Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779]

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 1, 2016 18:03:29 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 1, 2016 18:03:29 GMT -5

My friend requested a level for me called Bright Horizon, which made it into the Good Levels category. Hopefully this one goes above that!

- I am able to make adjustments. I would appreciate it if my level could be rated at least. It is a collab with AwesomeDash79, who got a few featured things. I tried to take the term "Sunset Level" beyond what people think.

-The beginning is 1.9, but I brought forward the 2.0 design. Toggles, Monsters, Robot Portal, etc.

-Thank you so much! And perhaps you could take a look at Bright Horizon again? If possible?

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Title: Another Realm
By: N4TH4N
ID: 17429779
Difficulty: Harder / 7 Stars
Video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFeIsPpqlu0
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Title: Bright Horizon
Forum Post: gdforum.freeforums.net/thread/12510/bright-horizon-gdn4th4n
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Thanks again! ^_^

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 1, 2016 18:38:22 GMT -5

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Post by vpp on Mar 1, 2016 18:38:22 GMT -5

Hey Nathan! I like this :3 I'll review it later if I have time.

HOWEVER, I'm seriously considering locking this but I won't. This is due to posting another one of your *already rated* levels in the same thread as a new one. Please don't do this again :333 and read the Level Suggestions Rules!!!!!

Last Edit: Mar 1, 2016 18:38:45 GMT -5 by vpp

Rating System Info:
I start at 5 for every level. From there, I make a list of pros and cons, and add or subtract points based on how bad or good that pro or con is. I judge based on five main categories, which I decribe here: pastebin.com/zpJEzF9p
Using this method, I give the level a final score out of 10.
0-3.99: Needs Improvement
4-5.99: Decent
6-7.99: Good
8-10: Feature Worthy
Tag me if you want me to rate your level! Use @ vpp w/o the space.

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 1, 2016 18:50:25 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 1, 2016 18:50:25 GMT -5

Haha. Okay sorry about that, I am new to this site. :3 Thanks so much man I appreciate it a bunch! @"vpp

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 2, 2016 15:15:58 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 2, 2016 15:15:58 GMT -5

vpp

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Favorite Level: The Adventure - Superopi
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Mini-Profile Background: ffffff
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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 2, 2016 16:09:37 GMT -5

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Post by vpp on Mar 2, 2016 16:09:37 GMT -5

Mar 1, 2016 18:50:25 GMT -5 Nathan said:

Haha. Okay sorry about that, I am new to this site. :3 Thanks so much man I appreciate it a bunch! @"vpp

haha... yeah I should make the not using " more clear in my sig XD

I swear I'll review this today or tomorrow... but I'm really busy, sorry ;;;

Rating System Info:
I start at 5 for every level. From there, I make a list of pros and cons, and add or subtract points based on how bad or good that pro or con is. I judge based on five main categories, which I decribe here: pastebin.com/zpJEzF9p
Using this method, I give the level a final score out of 10.
0-3.99: Needs Improvement
4-5.99: Decent
6-7.99: Good
8-10: Feature Worthy
Tag me if you want me to rate your level! Use @ vpp w/o the space.

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 2, 2016 21:54:21 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 2, 2016 21:54:21 GMT -5

XD

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 2, 2016 22:29:44 GMT -5

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Post by vpp on Mar 2, 2016 22:29:44 GMT -5

Hi! Reviewing now.

PROS:

There are some very original effects in here! They look really cool. (See: 85%) (+1.5)
The gameplay, in general, is pretty fun. (+1)

CONS:

There are also a few... not as original effects. Even awkward ones. (See: 55%) (-1)
This design is SO OVERUSED. Not only did you copy half of the level from awesomedash, but then you even used overused sunset design for the rest of the level too :/ (-1)
There are a few parts that it is hard to tell where you most go in the level. It's just... confusing. (See: 49%) (-0.5)

OVERALL: 5/10, Decent Level.

Moving. Keep up this work and you'll get a lot better, I can tell!!! This is pretty good too

Hope this helped.

Rating System Info:
I start at 5 for every level. From there, I make a list of pros and cons, and add or subtract points based on how bad or good that pro or con is. I judge based on five main categories, which I decribe here: pastebin.com/zpJEzF9p
Using this method, I give the level a final score out of 10.
0-3.99: Needs Improvement
4-5.99: Decent
6-7.99: Good
8-10: Feature Worthy
Tag me if you want me to rate your level! Use @ vpp w/o the space.

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 3, 2016 17:04:31 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 3, 2016 17:04:31 GMT -5

It was a collab. And thanks a lot (:

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 3, 2016 22:07:34 GMT -5

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Post by vpp on Mar 3, 2016 22:07:34 GMT -5

Mar 3, 2016 17:04:31 GMT -5 Nathan said:

It was a collab. And thanks a lot (:

tbh taking a famous creator's unfinished level =/= collab ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Rating System Info:
I start at 5 for every level. From there, I make a list of pros and cons, and add or subtract points based on how bad or good that pro or con is. I judge based on five main categories, which I decribe here: pastebin.com/zpJEzF9p
Using this method, I give the level a final score out of 10.
0-3.99: Needs Improvement
4-5.99: Decent
6-7.99: Good
8-10: Feature Worthy
Tag me if you want me to rate your level! Use @ vpp w/o the space.

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 4, 2016 17:00:30 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 4, 2016 17:00:30 GMT -5

vpp Okie, so I have been working. And you inspired me to work 10 times harder and experiment with triggers that I haven't used very much. What do you think of this?

I feel pretty confident haha

www.youtube.com/watch?v=96zNAgWrrXg

Thanks man! :3

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 4, 2016 17:02:00 GMT -5

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Post by Nathan on Mar 4, 2016 17:02:00 GMT -5

And this will be the last time I will have a different level on this post

Promise

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Another Realm by: N4TH4N [17429779] Mar 4, 2016 18:45:06 GMT -5

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Post by vpp on Mar 4, 2016 18:45:06 GMT -5

Mar 4, 2016 17:00:30 GMT -5 Nathan said:

vpp Okie, so I have been working. And you inspired me to work 10 times harder and experiment with triggers that I haven't used very much. What do you think of this?

I feel pretty confident haha

www.youtube.com/watch?v=96zNAgWrrXg

Thanks man! :3

OK, there's a thread for this called sneak peaks

But it's OK <333 looking pree good :3

Rating System Info:
I start at 5 for every level. From there, I make a list of pros and cons, and add or subtract points based on how bad or good that pro or con is. I judge based on five main categories, which I decribe here: pastebin.com/zpJEzF9p
Using this method, I give the level a final score out of 10.
0-3.99: Needs Improvement
4-5.99: Decent
6-7.99: Good
8-10: Feature Worthy
Tag me if you want me to rate your level! Use @ vpp w/o the space.