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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2016 8:53:35 GMT -5
A collab by me(bennxt) and Insomnia. One of my first levels, I hope it isn't too bad *3* ID:17392841 (AV ID:17395929) video: youtu.be/l3VvsNe0QFo
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Post by DaxD0w on Mar 2, 2016 0:15:04 GMT -5
Im no level judge but this looks very nice! Although it would be EVEN more better if you tried a custom background that fits your level
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Post by Safyire on Mar 16, 2016 18:01:07 GMT -5
I hope I can be a good judge to you Level: Spectrum Paradise Gameplay: 7.5/10 Great gameplay, I saw few chances of bugs, even playing it myself. Some timings are unexpected, however, and some transitions don't leave enough reaction time for the player. Decoration: 4/10 Decoration is not good but also not horrible. Layering needs work since background decorations clash with the foreground, and the colors contribute to that clashing. I suggest making the background decorations lower in opacity and less eye-catching, as it can distract the players. Music Sync: 7.5/10 Decent sync, the upbeat music fits well with the current gameplay style and obstacles, but in some segments, such as the robot parts, do not have sync present. Creativity: x1.0 The fact that every object in the level has a bright color of a rainbow is not innovative or creative, but I won't take away points because it's something not overused. Overall Score: 6.3/10 - Good Level, but I think it goes from the border of Good Levels and Decent Levels. Need a judge to approve my review, I am uncertain about mine.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2016 23:01:09 GMT -5
Thanks for the review, I'll try to get rid of these problems when making future levels. Btw the rainbow spam was intentional, but I'll tell Insomnia to tone the obnoxiousness down a bit.
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Post by kiriE on Mar 19, 2016 17:08:15 GMT -5
I'll also review it I agree with Safyire a lot Design: 3/10 - Design needs a lot of work. All the rainbow sparks feels randomly placed and has the same size every single one. Also it feels like imo that the design is very unorganized and just doesn't work for me, especially 0:10. Also the rainbow blocks are extremely bright and with bright bgs too everything just gets a bright messy mess. Also why are the sparks white at 0:16? The sparks following the player at that part also isn't really neat and just adds to the mess... 0:34 - Organize and systemize (is that a word? XD) the rainbow sparks here, just looks random and messy. Boss fith looks decent Originality: 3.5/10 - Meh, not original and the fact that everything is covered with rainbow colors doesn't help :/ Gameplay: 7/10 - Gameplay looks nice and fun! Boss fight is VERY sudden though, you should have made more time for the player to react for the attacks in the fight. Music Sync: 6/10 - Sync is alright. Wasn't really remarkable and didn't really feel like it has been put a lot of effort into it. Sorry for the harsh review, do NOT take this personal! :/ I see great potential, just improve your design and be more original next time and you'll make good levels in no time I want to rank this level higher, but the design just kills it for me, sorry Total Score: 4.8/10 NEEDS IMPROVEMENT+
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2016 22:26:18 GMT -5
I will admit that the level looks really messy, because I made 0:16-0:33 and the boss fight, ran out of ideas, then sent it to Insomnia to finish it ;3;
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Post by vpp on Apr 4, 2016 20:26:44 GMT -5
I'm going to combine Safyire's and kiriE's reviews and move this to decent. Good reviews to both of you. As for Safyire, never doubt yourself. Your rates are great, and more than that, you are a really nice and cool person. You should always be confident.
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