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Favorite Level: Crunchy Apple v2
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Post by Novus on Feb 10, 2016 17:55:40 GMT -5
Hello everyone! I hope you like my level Lockout, and I hope it's good enough to be rated! Level info Name: Lockout ID: 16038124 Song: Lockout by Lockyn Song link: www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/561277
Video link: www.youtube.com/watch?v=O50u3uhUffw Hope you enjoy!  EDIT: I should have mentioned that this started off as a 1.9 project, and never got finished before 2.0 so I built the rest 2.0 like, so that's why it's not very 2.0 like, so yeah xD |
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Post by Omega on Feb 10, 2016 21:14:05 GMT -5
The design is quite pitiful but some of the combos with the style is cool. The gameplay is outstanding accept for the ending, which looks fricking annoying as hell. A bit too much 1.9 there.
Decent
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Post by Gusearth on Feb 10, 2016 23:01:11 GMT -5
I found u Novus 8)) Also, I like the simple style but try adding some kind of custom backgrounds or just more decoration in addition to the clouds  |
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52 posts
Favorite Level: Crunchy Apple v2
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Post by Novus on Feb 11, 2016 19:32:48 GMT -5
I found u Novus 8)) Also, I like the simple style but try adding some kind of custom backgrounds or just more decoration in addition to the clouds Yeah, I forgot to say that it was a 1.9 project, so I've edited that  I hope that a level judge will come and see it soon, and will keep in mind it was mostly made in 1.9 xD But anyways, thanks for your opinions! |
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Post by ~Pear~ on Feb 11, 2016 19:55:11 GMT -5
Gameplay: 11/12By far one of the best layouts I have ever seen. Some amazing gameplay mechanics and fun jumps. The only thing I could fault you on here is that the drop was a little unexciting. I expected something more, instead of invisible mirror portals and dissapearing obstacles. I would redo the drop and make it a bit more fast paced, perhaps a dual, or mixed dual if you like. Design: 7/10Beautiful design, but it felt kind of lacking. Like if there could be more creativity added. Some 2.0 designs would ruin the level in my opinion, because it is very nicely 1.9 styled. I also would have added more unique block combinations. The wave part was gorgeous, don't you dare change it. Deco + Effects: 4.5/8Probably what you need the most work on. You know the saying "Don't judge a book by it's cover"? Well many people do. In your level, the beginning was the part that lacked the most decoration, and it got way better towards the middle and end. I would spice up the beginning if I were you. Also, I think some glow stars would have looked good in this level. Music Sync: 5/5Great sync with transitions and drop, lots of beating objects and bg flashes, which was all good. Bonus: 5/5I really liked how you combined awesome gameplay with simple design Overall: 32/40
= 80%
feature worthy
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I hope that a level judge will come and see it soon, and will keep in mind it was mostly made in 1.9 xD 
