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Post by EnderpDDark on Feb 4, 2016 7:33:32 GMT -5
So after I've put my level in suggested levels, a level judge gave me some advices to make better, and I listened to him and updated the level! News: -Changed brick blocks texture from 1x1 bricks to connected bricks. -Added custom background (my first one ever, sorry if it's bad  ) -Hardned 1 obstacle. Level name: Forsaken Souls ID: 15679744 Song: Detious & Lockyn - Allure Requested stars: 6 Current rating: 6 stars Hope you will like the new version! Of course give me more advices plz! Thanks in advance!  Mechanguis |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2016 15:16:01 GMT -5
This level is okay. Its not the best or anything and has some things that bother me. In both gameplay and decorations. Gameplay:
The gameplay... When I played it I had some issues with it. I found a few bugs and some places had some weird timings aswell. The robot parts were pretty annoying and not really fun.
The boss-fight thing part was pretty unpredictable. Even though you did add indicators that an obstacle was coming, the reaction time is too short and it pretty much becomes pure memorization parts and that isnt fun most of the time :x
Generally, the gameplay is ok, but could need some nerfs here and there. But dont break the difficulty if you want it 6*
Normally, I would judge sync, but I'm too lazy to do it because I had a hard time with it, even in practice.
Decoration:Good that you tried to make a custom background but it gets kinda repetitive after a while with only brick and fire. There are also many other levels out there that look exactly the same but maybe done a little better. There are also some weird color combinations throughout the level that doesn't really lool that good. Like blue and red. (Blue spinning things with blue arrow and red fire, background etc.) For example at around 80% the background becomes purple all while that you see red stuff remaining and it does not really look good. The transition to the color change is weird aswell because it instantly becomes purple. Suggestion to you would be adding different decorations. Look at the levels in meltdown. Try to come up with some cool block designs and cool original decorations with good color combos. Change it up a bit  Make sure to read all of what I have been suggesting to make the level better. I'm not sh!tstorming, only critizising and only wanting your level to become better  |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2016 15:19:22 GMT -5
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Post by EnderpDDark on Feb 4, 2016 15:36:05 GMT -5
This level is okay. Its not the best or anything and has some things that bother me. In both gameplay and decorations. Gameplay:
The gameplay... When I played it I had some issues with it. I found a few bugs and some places had some weird timings aswell. The robot parts were pretty annoying and not really fun.
The boss-fight thing part was pretty unpredictable. Even though you did add indicators that an obstacle was coming, the reaction time is too short and it pretty much becomes pure memorization parts and that isnt fun most of the time :x
Generally, the gameplay is ok, but could need some nerfs here and there. But dont break the difficulty if you want it 6*
Normally, I would judge sync, but I'm too lazy to do it because I had a hard time with it, even in practice.
Decoration:Good that you tried to make a custom background but it gets kinda repetitive after a while with only brick and fire. There are also many other levels out there that look exactly the same but maybe done a little better. There are also some weird color combinations throughout the level that doesn't really lool that good. Like blue and red. (Blue spinning things with blue arrow and red fire, background etc.) For example at around 80% the background becomes purple all while that you see red stuff remaining and it does not really look good. The transition to the color change is weird aswell because it instantly becomes purple. Suggestion to you would be adding different decorations. Look at the levels in meltdown. Try to come up with some cool block designs and cool original decorations with good color combos. Change it up a bit Make sure to read all of what I have been suggesting to make the level better. I'm not sh!tstorming, only critizising and only wanting your level to become better Thanks alot for reviewing my level! ^_^ (btw Im not racist or s/th but that smile in your pic is... creepy ;- I still want to clarify some points: -Blue spinning things with blue arrow and red fire, background etc.: hmmm I didn't use any blue arrows, I think it's just your player colors cause I use PC1 and PC2 most of the time. -For example at around 80% the background becomes purple all while that you see red stuff remaining and it does not really look good. The transition to the color change is weird aswell because it instantly becomes purple: if you'd played it in normal more, you'd notice that the color transition is synced with the music, that's why it's sudden. -The boss-fight thing part was pretty unpredictable. Even though you did add indicators that an obstacle was coming, the reaction time is too short and it pretty much becomes pure memorization parts and that isnt fun most of the time :x: it wasn't really a boss fight cause techenecly, you didn't shoot anything at the Forsaken Souls, you just dodge their attacks, and about being original, I think I came up with a new concept with the 2nd soul but otherways it's true it's most of memo and the other parts aren't original :/ I will think about better ideas for parkour -I found a few bugs and some places had some weird timings aswell. The robot parts were pretty annoying and not really fun: I replayed the level about 500 other attempts (even after verifing it) just to fetch ALL the bugs, so can you plz tell me the bugs and weird timed parts to fix them? (if you're not lazy ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) XD ) Also why is the Bot annoying? -Good that you tried to make a custom background but it gets kinda repetitive after a while with only brick and fire. There are also many other levels out there that look exactly the same but maybe done a little better: Thanks for the advice! It was a bit bad cause it's my first CBG I'll work on it! But anyways thanks alooooooot! Decent level?! YAY! @cypher |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2016 16:06:22 GMT -5
EnderpDDarkto be honest , just start on a new level. Since you now know what is important. Dont make cancerous gameplay and make sure to have good decorations. They can be simple and not advanced to be featured. Dont worry Regarding the 2-1p colors. Dont use them ever, unless you make it work properly. You have 999 color channels, renember that.
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Post by EnderpDDark on Feb 4, 2016 17:09:43 GMT -5
EnderpDDarkto be honest , just start on a new level. Since you now know what is important. Dont make cancerous gameplay and make sure to have good decorations. They can be simple and not advanced to be featured. Dont worry Regarding the 2-1p colors. Dont use them ever, unless you make it work properly. You have 999 color channels, renember that. Simple but not advanced level... Yup! Cycles 2k15!!!! Thanks for the Advice! I'll work on a remake of Cycles using the Cycles 2015 edition song! |
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