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Post by deltastorm on Jan 24, 2016 14:42:17 GMT -5
Hey guys! I realized that if I wanted to be a good creator, I needed to put time and effort into actually making a level, so I did!  I appreciate any advice for making it better, and any constructive criticism.  (I know my gameplay needs work, sorry about that.) Level name: Nucleic I.D: 16189083 Video: everyplay.com/videos/25277328Thanks for reviewing! |
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Post by bdud3 on Jan 24, 2016 21:36:06 GMT -5
Hello deltastorm, I watched your gameplay and tried out your level, so i'll post my opinion here (i'm not a lvl judge, but this review might get approved) General Opinion: Very nice for your first lvl! You learned the mechanics a LOT faster than i did  Gameplay: This is probably the part you should work on, if any. Although not as bad as many other featured lvls out there, at certain areas the gameplay can get kinda annoying, but generally not too bad for a first lvl. (6/10) Decorations: Pretty noice slow-moving decors in the background, your effects that you're using do look cool. (8/10) Music Trimming: Although you handled it pretty well generally, at the mini ball part, there can be some Xtra work on the trimming. (8/10) Creativity: Very good! I really like the beginning in which the player can create his/her own obstacle arrangement, and everything else was pretty darn cool. (10/10) Total Tally (32/40) = (8/10) My Rating: Good (Should be rated, maybe even featured) |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2016 15:57:27 GMT -5
My review:
First Impression:
It's definetly not feature worthy. Personally, I would put it in decent, borderline-good.
Decorations: Can be a bit stale at times, but you do know how to use the 2.0 features so you're on the way for improvement. Could use better backgrounds in some places. Probably give it a 4.5/10
Gameplay: It's pretty good but also bad. Fast paced gameplay with different use of gamemodes. Does need work in some places, otherwise good. 6/10?
Miscallaneous: Sync is really good and really makes the level fun to play. Song is not used too much, so that's a plus with me.
There are some that have been used before in other levels so its not that good.
6/10
The bossfight thing part was bad, I didnt like it.
The beginning had creative gameplay but decorations were not good at all.
The ball part was a little boring and deco was the same and not that dynamic as some other parts.
The mini cube needs some improvement with additional decorations, but its good otherwise.
First wave was really annoying.
General Score: 5/10
Decent, on the tip of good.
@judges
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Post by ~Pear~ on Jan 25, 2016 15:59:22 GMT -5
moved to decent
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Post by deltastorm on Jan 25, 2016 16:40:54 GMT -5
Dang, I was getting so happy when bdud3 said it was "Good (Should be rated, maybe even featured)". Oh well...
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