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Post by Omikron on Jan 24, 2016 13:16:23 GMT -5
Hello! I made my third level, its length is XL.
ID: 16177568
Name: Blown Away
Music: Blown Away by DJVI
Difficulty: 5 stars? (I'm not good at rating)
I will try to record video but I'm not sure if I will manage to do that because my phone is lagging when I record and it is difficult to complete level then. Although level is pretty easy so I think you can complete it and then review (if you are going to play on practise leave it to another judge, I want my level to be judged completely, with music sync).
Also, I have one question. When I place moving block too far on the right side of screen it jumps few blocks to the left during gameplay. Am I doing something wrong or is it some kind of bug?
I allowed copying now, maybe it will make judging easier.
Pass; 27390
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Post by benjaminstrike on Jan 27, 2016 3:31:52 GMT -5
Ok I'll review it.
Gameplay: 6
Not much to say about this. The first 3% where you do nothing is boring though. And some transitions occur off-screen. Don't do that, players need to know where they're going.
Decoration: 4
On some places there are very bad color mixes, for example the blue and red in the beginning. And the background is very empty. The blocks aren't decorated or very bad decorated.
Music sync: 7
Not too bad, could be better, especially at the ship parts, but for the rest, nothing to say. The lack of gameplay made it hard to review though.
Overall: 5.6
Needs improvement
Tips:
1. Make more user interacted gameplay, and put some gameplay in the beginning or make the intro shorter.
2. Make sure the colors are good.
3. Look at the featured pages to see how you could decorate your levels. Don't overdo it though, but your level is way too empty now.
4. Move some orbs a bit to make them sync more for the optimal user experience!
That's all! Thanks for reading ^^
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Post by YVX The Master Of Salt on Jan 27, 2016 6:41:48 GMT -5
Ok I'll review it. Gameplay: 6 Not much to say about this. The first 3% where you do nothing is boring though. And some transitions occur off-screen. Don't do that, players need to know where they're going.
Decoration: 4
On some places there are very bad color mixes, for example the blue and red in the beginning. And the background is very empty. The blocks aren't decorated or very bad decorated.
Music sync: 7
Not too bad, could be better, especially at the ship parts, but for the rest, nothing to say. The lack of gameplay made it hard to review though.
Overall: 5.6
Needs improvement
Tips:
1. Make more user interacted gameplay, and put some gameplay in the beginning or make the intro shorter.
2. Make sure the colors are good.
3. Look at the featured pages to see how you could decorate your levels. Don't overdo it though, but your level is way too empty now.
4. Move some orbs a bit to make them sync more for the optimal user experience!
That's all! Thanks for reading ^^ Wat 5.6 = Needs improvement think its Decent Btw cool concept but the execution are bad |
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Post by benjaminstrike on Jan 27, 2016 8:42:19 GMT -5
Ok I'll review it. Gameplay: 6 Not much to say about this. The first 3% where you do nothing is boring though. And some transitions occur off-screen. Don't do that, players need to know where they're going.
Decoration: 4
On some places there are very bad color mixes, for example the blue and red in the beginning. And the background is very empty. The blocks aren't decorated or very bad decorated.
Music sync: 7
Not too bad, could be better, especially at the ship parts, but for the rest, nothing to say. The lack of gameplay made it hard to review though.
Overall: 5.6
Needs improvement
Tips:
1. Make more user interacted gameplay, and put some gameplay in the beginning or make the intro shorter.
2. Make sure the colors are good.
3. Look at the featured pages to see how you could decorate your levels. Don't overdo it though, but your level is way too empty now.
4. Move some orbs a bit to make them sync more for the optimal user experience!
That's all! Thanks for reading ^^ Wat 5.6 = Needs improvement think its Decent Btw cool concept but the execution are bad I don't agree on the decent, I really thinks this belongs in needs improvement, but yeah, the execution is bad. |
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Post by YVX The Master Of Salt on Jan 27, 2016 8:44:44 GMT -5
Wat 5.6 = Needs improvement think its Decent Btw cool concept but the execution are bad I don't agree on the decent, I really thinks this belongs in needs improvement, but yeah, the execution is bad. but how 5.6/10 belong in needs improvement |
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Post by NiTro451 on Jan 27, 2016 8:44:57 GMT -5
Moved
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Post by Omikron on Jan 27, 2016 11:41:02 GMT -5
Thank you for review! I will use your tips to make better levels in future.
Although, I have some questions:
1. Can you say some more bad color mixes which I used in the level? I can't find any after that which you mentioned.
2. Lack of gameplay? There are some parts where you don't do anything but the level has a lot of gameplay.
3. And finally, why was this level moved to needs improvement? 5,6 means it should go to decent.
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Post by Omikron on Jan 28, 2016 12:32:25 GMT -5
Can anybody move this level to proper section?
@judges
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Post by ~Pear~ on Jan 28, 2016 15:05:41 GMT -5
yeah this is decent not needs improvement
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