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Post by dashfygo on Jan 22, 2016 12:29:32 GMT -5
this level isn't to hard but i'm more focusing on the visuals. any feedback appreciated
level name: STAR WARS DARK SIDE ID:16061557
here is a link to a video of the level: www.youtube.com/watch?v=DvxAd7SnF7k
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Post by benjaminstrike on Jan 22, 2016 19:18:05 GMT -5
I'm going to be real here. The level seems pretty empty, and the 3rd coin is just... no. The end is just pure nothingness. The block deco is better though.
Gameplay: 5 Not much happening Decoration: 4 It's empty, but not in a good way. Average 4.5 Needs Improvement
Try to sync your level more with the music and adding background decorations is a good idea for you to concider.
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Post by skylighter on Jan 22, 2016 20:53:27 GMT -5
Music reminds me of something from a movie trailer.
Design: Design was mostly bland. It just didn't feel like a completed level most of the time. Excluding the design, this could be a 1.0 level. However, the Star Wars design was pretty creative, and I could see that you put some effort into the models. Also, the color combinations were all right. Overall, the design needs more decorations for the design. 3/10.
Decoration: Most of the time, decoration was non-existent. There was barely any decoration in the air, and the parts that did have decoration were mediocre. Decoration was mostly under-decorated, especially near the end, where there was absolutely nothing at all (other than the Millennium Falcon?). Try to add plenty of decorations in every part of your level. I also noticed a lot of copy and paste as well; make sure to avoid that. 3/10.
Gameplay: The gameplay was uninteresting. Many parts of the level involve doing almost nothing, which isn't a good thing when you make a level. The main part with no gameplay at all was the ending, where it was just empty. The only good thing about the gameplay was that it wasn't buggy, but you should really consider adding more gameplay by adding more jumps or things to do. 2/10.
Music Sync: Music sync mostly comes down to which song you pick. It feels like this wasn't the right song to pick for this level because music sync was barely there. The only sync that was there was at the transitions and the visuals. The jumps weren't synced at all, and the cube's gameplay didn't seem to match the song. To be honest, it's not very easy to sync this song in the first place because it's not really a song until the end. It's just sound effects with sounds and voices from Star Wars. Anyways, the sync wasn't very good. 2/10.
Overall, this level needs improvement. This level is lacking in many aspects, but mostly the gameplay, decoration, and music sync. The gameplay should sync with the music to make the level enjoyable. Also, you should add more decoration so that it doesn't look plain. This level has potential, but it's all up to choosing the right song to make the level.
((3+3+2+2)/40)=10/40=2.5/10=Needs Improvement
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