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Post by awesomedude249 on Jan 21, 2016 14:24:02 GMT -5
ID: 16078698 Stars requested: 4 Song: Code Red - Dr Phonics This is my first level that's actually good, I put in a lot of decoration and made it go to the music. Somebody please review!
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Post by awesomedude249 on Jan 22, 2016 14:05:45 GMT -5
Could somebody review this please? I spent a lot of time on it.
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Post by milesman34 on Jan 22, 2016 20:21:50 GMT -5
Can you add a video?
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Post by Mechanguis on Jan 23, 2016 0:30:16 GMT -5
Gameplay: There are a few bugs I found in the level, like how it's possible to skip the robot portal. Also, the it was pretty outdated, with none of the new stuff like speed portals, tele portals, etc. Be sure to incorporate those into your level. It's also pretty repetitive sometimes. Decorations: Needs a lot of work. - Don't use 1.0 blocks. They don't look good at all.
- The colors of the BG, G, and the object colors (both base and detail) all have to synergize with each other.
- More deco! The level feels pretty empty.
- Don't use P1 and P2 as colors. We have infinite color channels.
- Add deco to the sawblades.
Music Sync: Played in practice mode, can't judge.
Overall: Tbh, this feels like a "first level". That being said, if you follow these criticisms, I think you can improve a lot!
Needs Improvement
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Post by awesomedude249 on Jan 23, 2016 11:26:23 GMT -5
I do agree that it is a little repetetive, but I thought the music sync and deco were good. Compared to my earlier levels, this is a pretty good one.
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