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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2016 5:07:10 GMT -5
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Favorite Level: Asmyetry
Hardest Demon: ff0000
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Post by chocothep1e on Jan 12, 2016 7:55:38 GMT -5
Looks better, but now the background looks really repetitive.
Another 10/10 best review?
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Post by Alive on Jan 12, 2016 7:58:49 GMT -5
Looks better, but now the background looks really repetitive. Another 10/10 best review? Why does nobody takes a look at my map? -.- |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2016 9:26:27 GMT -5
Looks better, but now the background looks really repetitive. Another 10/10 best review? I was in a hurry so the background looks repetitive sorry ;-; |
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Favorite Level: 69 machine ⁽ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°⁾
Hardest Demon: blue
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Post by YVX The Master Of Salt on Jan 12, 2016 9:39:12 GMT -5
Looks better, but now the background looks really repetitive. Another 10/10 best review? Why does nobody takes a look at my map? -.- rule no.4 level section no advertising your levels in someone else thread |
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Favorite Level: Toxic sewers
Hardest Demon: ultra drivers
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Post by Retired moderator. on Jan 12, 2016 9:42:57 GMT -5
You can't get away with using that much copy paste in 2.0. I'll be generous so
deco: 2/10
gameplay: 8/10
5/10
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2016 9:47:23 GMT -5
You can't get away with using that much copy paste in 2.0. I'll be generous so deco: 2/10 gameplay: 8/10 5/10 Why nobody understands the reason why i copy and past shît i have to do my assignment all the time so..... v I was in a hurry so the background looks repetitive sorry ;-; |
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Favorite Level: Toxic sewers
Hardest Demon: ultra drivers
Mini-Profile Background: {"image":"","color":"ac1aab"}
Mini-Profile Name Color: fa55f3
Mini-Profile Text Color: f842f0
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Post by Retired moderator. on Jan 12, 2016 9:50:26 GMT -5
You can't get away with using that much copy paste in 2.0. I'll be generous so deco: 2/10 gameplay: 8/10 5/10 Why nobody understands the reason why i copy and past shît i have to do my assignment all the time so..... v I was in a hurry so the background looks repetitive sorry ;-; Am I supposed to go easy on you for being busy? That's not what we do |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 12, 2016 9:53:53 GMT -5
Why nobody understands the reason why i copy and past shît i have to do my assignment all the time so..... v Am I supposed to go easy on you for being busy? That's not what we do I really hope im not one of the people in the world whos unlucky enough to run into errands every single time. |
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Post by ~Pear~ on Jan 12, 2016 16:05:46 GMT -5
what kind of reviews are those!
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Post by benjaminstrike on Jan 12, 2016 17:51:48 GMT -5
Deco and gameplay are copy pasted wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too much, but gameplay seems good for a 2* though.
Deco: 2.5/10
Gameplay: 7.5/10
Choose different custom backgrounds for each part, and try to use the deco around the objects more creatively!
I suck at reviews xD
Maybe add random sawblades in the Robot parts, with some nice deco around it, or make a special theme for the level. You can also maybe add some clouds in the flight part, and do the brightness of the background color a bit darker.
I also think some orange glow objects will fit nice in this level!
You could also make the spikes like the beginning of Viking Arena (GD Meltdown)
Anyways somebody move this to Needs Improvement.
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Post by skylighter on Jan 12, 2016 18:33:35 GMT -5
Deco and gameplay are copy pasted wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too much, but gameplay seems good for a 2* though. Deco: 2.5/10 Gameplay: 7.5/10 Choose different custom backgrounds for each part, and try to use the deco around the objects more creatively! I suck at reviews xD Maybe add random sawblades in the Robot parts, with some nice deco around it, or make a special theme for the level. You can also maybe add some clouds in the flight part, and do the brightness of the background color a bit darker. I also think some orange glow objects will fit nice in this level! You could also make the spikes like the beginning of Viking Arena (GD Meltdown) Anyways somebody move this to Needs Improvement. I'll just add on to this (this advice is toward Ender). Even with the background the level is still a bit bland. I can see the custom background and some decorations, but there are some places that still looks plain. Tip to not making level bland: Think about a space that's empty with no decorations, no nothing. Your level removes some space, which is good. However, there is still some space left where you can put decoration, which is why this level is a bit plain. This is my idea to building a decorative level. To tell you the truth, I would have prefered the custom background to change to another. I know that you didn't have much time, but the design is a bit boring because the level doesn't change decoration-wise. Also, if you are going to make a Stereo Madness, it would be much better-looking if you used some 2.0 blocks. I see that it's (obviously) a Stereo Madness "remake", but here are my tips: Add color to the spikes, change the decoration from time to time, add 3D blocks, replace 1.0 blocks with 1.9/2.0 blocks (if you want to) Also, this gameplay is too hard for a 2*, this is probably a 5*. This isn't a full review because other people have already explain it, but I would put this in "Needs Improvement". Overall score is 3.3/10. |
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Post by RainbowGPF on Jan 12, 2016 19:38:33 GMT -5
Awesome level! Here are some of the good qualities of the level: - A pretty accurate remake of Stereo Madness
- Nice custom background
- Decent music sync
Here are some of the qualities of the level that need improving: - Repetitive custom background
- No 1.9/2.0 blocks or spikes
- Lacks 2.0 effects
Overall, I'd give this level a 6/10. It's good, but it needs a lot of improvements. |
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Post by B) on Jan 12, 2016 20:17:29 GMT -5
Same with last time, I find that you still need to use more blocks than focus on bg. There is still a very limited block and deco choice and that's what really kills it, other than the mediocre gameplay.
Pros
- Background looks nice
- Has mediocre gameplay
- Music sync
Cons
- No decorations whatsoever
- Repetitive background
- Mediocre gameplay
- Bad choice of spikes
- No seen variety of blocks
5/10, decent levels
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Post by RainbowGPF on Jan 12, 2016 20:20:54 GMT -5
I should make an Ender Madness v2. *walks away doubtedly*
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