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Post by EnderpDDark on Jan 9, 2016 7:46:10 GMT -5
Well I dunno if I can suggest the levels of others but I want to suggest this level! My best friend IRL made it (he's way better than me) and I really enjoyed the level! That's why I'm putting it here (he doesn't like going on forums). Level name: Worst-Journey Level ID: 14915059 Song: Moonstone Stars: 6 Plz warn me if I'm doing anything bad! Hope you'll enjoy the level! asriel You do re ally good reviews can you plz do one for this level?
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Post by vpp on Jan 23, 2016 21:34:28 GMT -5
Hey EnderpDDark! I'm sorry that I'm not Asriel, but I've decided to review your level anyway Remember a few things. I'm not an official level judge and this is my opinion.Hope this review helps! PROS:
- I like how there is many paths at some parts. This provides for some replayability and uses a concept that I think is underused here in GD (+1)
- Some of the art was kind of good, like the ! sign. Also, the text was kind of fun lol x3 (+0.5)
CONS: - The level lacked much of any decoration. (-1.5)
- The gameplay was annoying at times. (-1)
- As a result of not having much decoration, the level was not very creative. (-1)
- Some of the level seemed very unoriginal as well. For example, the boss fight concept is super overused. (-1)
Final Score: 2/10 Needs Improvement Hey, we all have our first level. In fact, I'd goes as far to say that mine was much worse than this, with barely seeable blocks, no decoration, and design that changed halfway through a section. Keep working at it
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Post by Mechanguis on Jan 23, 2016 23:37:59 GMT -5
TFW only one judge is tagged ;3; Hey EnderpDDark ! I'm sorry that I'm not Asriel, but I've decided to review your level anyway Remember a few things. I'm not an official level judge and this is my opinion.Hope this review helps! PROS:
- I like how there is many paths at some parts. This provides for some replayability and uses a concept that I think is underused here in GD (+1)
- Some of the art was kind of good, like the ! sign. Also, the text was kind of fun lol x3 (+0.5)
CONS: - The level lacked much of any decoration. (-1.5)
- The gameplay was annoying at times. (-1)
- As a result of not having much decoration, the level was not very creative. (-1)
- Some of the level seemed very unoriginal as well. For example, the boss fight concept is super overused. (-1)
Final Score: 2/10 Needs Improvement Hey, we all have our first level. In fact, I'd goes as far to say that mine was much worse than this, with barely seeable blocks, no decoration, and design that changed halfway through a section. Keep working at it
Approved. Your friend definitely needs improvement on his level, however, I will say it's better than most people's first level. Hopefully, he'll take the criticism from this to improve his level to be a better creator Moved to Needs ImprovementEnderpDDark
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