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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 7, 2016 10:25:39 GMT -5
I just finished my first level. It´s called "Through the Blue" and its ID is 15650060. can´t record the game from my phone so i don´t have video material.. I´ve put much effort in this level and i hope it´s good and not too easy. If i could get 100 likes, that´d be sick
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Favorite Level: Geometrical Dominator
Hardest Demon: ff0000
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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 8, 2016 9:33:28 GMT -5
Could someone review this? I want to know if i can improve something
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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 13, 2016 14:33:01 GMT -5
Alright, i will give it one last try. I made a video about the level. Here you go, level judges: R u happy now? I really want some feedback, no matter if it comes from a level judge or any other player
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Post by milesman34 on Jan 14, 2016 18:29:14 GMT -5
Gameplay: 2/3.5 The gameplay is decent, but it just isn't really that interesting. The UFO at the end is annoying because of everything being invisible. Decor/Design: 0.5/3.5 Rather empty. The end is the worst part since there is barely anything there. Also it's 1.7 styled to an extent with little decor so I can't give you that many points. Sync: 0.5/1.5 Not that well synced. Its ok I guess, but most of it just isn't there. Originality: 0/1.5 1.7 styled levels were good in 1.7 but this isn't original. Total: 3/10 Probably Needs Improvement or Decent. Good first level, but you really need features from the latest updates. Difficulty: 5
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2016 18:38:05 GMT -5
Gameplay: 5/10 It's good but it doesnt utilize the new features of 2.0. Its fast paced and looks fun but it could use more gamemodes but not portal spam.
Sync: 3/10 Ok sync but it loosens a bit on the end.
Decoration, block designs, color combos: 2/10 You used for the most part light blue brick over the whole level and had purple and light blue comboed with each other on a dark blue background. It doesnt look good for the most part and is repetetive.
Originality: 1/10 Even though it's your first level it lacks originality with not so much deco or effects.
3/10 - Needs improvement but is good for your first level.
Rating: probably Hard 5* to Harder 6*.
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Favorite Level: Geometrical Dominator
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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 14, 2016 19:38:14 GMT -5
Gameplay: 5/10 It's good but it doesnt utilize the new features of 2.0. Its fast paced and looks fun but it could use more gamemodes but not portal spam. Sync: 3/10 Ok sync but it loosens a bit on the end. Decoration, block designs, color combos: 2/10 You used for the most part light blue brick over the whole level and had purple and light blue comboed with each other on a dark blue background. It doesnt look good for the most part and is repetetive. Originality: 1/10 Even though it's your first level it lacks originality with not so much deco or effects. 3/10 - Needs improvement but is good for your first level. Rating: probably Hard 5* to Harder 6*. The interesting this is that the end indeed syncs pretty well imo. Of course you don´t have to but you will most likely get through the final part if you tap on the beat. Play it. You will probably know what i mean Idk, what are the new features on 2.0? I haven´t been around for long time. I tried not to distract the player by adding much unnecessary visuals though i admit that it looks a bit stale. (By the way, the purple and some of the light blue are the player colors. My colors indeed don´t mash well with the blue but it looks pretty nice with other colors.) What makes me sad though is the low sync ratins since i mainly focussed on the music sync. Thanks for the feedback people! I will try and improve the level as good as i can.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2016 19:52:42 GMT -5
PonjiskI have been up for longer than I should have, I may have said something wrong. The sync is good throughout the level but when it gets to the very end it isnt as good anymore. Maybe 5-6/10 idk i'm tired. Replaying it soon. The new features of 2.0 are move triggers, which you can move things with. Alpha triggers, that you can change the opacity of a group. Pulse triggers, basically the new color1-2-3-4, bg and you can change colors of portals. You can find tutorials of this on youtube.
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Favorite Level: Geometrical Dominator
Hardest Demon: ff0000
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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 14, 2016 19:56:21 GMT -5
I'll most likely remake the whole last part. I don't like it that much either tbh.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2016 20:07:19 GMT -5
I'll most likely remake the whole last part. I don't like it that much either tbh. Hey, I say you redecorate the whole level and it will be the best 2.0 level to date. I played it now (sorry for not doing so earlier) and i got to admit the gameplay is really fun and the sync is good but a little bit off. Not too much for the ordinary geometry dash player to care about.
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Favorite Level: Geometrical Dominator
Hardest Demon: ff0000
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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 15, 2016 5:26:15 GMT -5
@scrub, the problem is that i'm not into visual design in level making. Not only that i don't really know how to make cool effects, i also don't like them that much. So if you or someone else could help me with that i'd really appreciate it
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Post by Mechanguis on Jan 15, 2016 6:47:06 GMT -5
I'm moving this to Needs Improvement for now.
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Post by VegetarianBacon on Jan 15, 2016 7:02:19 GMT -5
My review is based out of 10.
Gameplay: 4.5 Decoration: 2 Creativity: 3 Overall: 3.2
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Favorite Level: Geometrical Dominator
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Post by Ponjisk on Jan 15, 2016 7:11:37 GMT -5
I guess the last part really makes this seem worse than it is.. I'll definitely change it.
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Post by ~Pear~ on Jan 15, 2016 20:50:42 GMT -5
moving to needs improvement, this is final
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