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Post by RyanAB on Jan 3, 2016 2:44:04 GMT -5
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Favorite Level: Not sure (I would say the Altergame series)
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Post by albertalberto on Jan 3, 2016 3:19:00 GMT -5
pros:
- first part is calm and simple, but good
. really good sinc with music
- good gameplay
- coins are well placed
cons:
- the background at 33% stills there during ALL the level
- also, the BG doesn't look pretty good :/
8,2 good level, keep building! also, congratz for 100 subs! :3
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Post by skylighter on Jan 5, 2016 23:05:32 GMT -5
Design: The design was too repetitive. I wasn't very fond of the flashing colors at the beginning. Those colors were a bit too bright. Other than that, the beginning looked good. However, the main problem was that this level looked way too simple. Starting from 33%, the design was the same throughout, which is a problem because it would be nicer to have a few different designs or backgrounds instead of just two in the entire level. There really isn't much more I can say, because I basically talked about the entire level. Overall, this design got dull very quickly because of lack of design change throughout the level. 4/10. Decoration: The decoration was mostly like the design. The first 30% percent of the level was alright, but the rest of the level was not very good. I'm not saying that the decoration was bad. It's just that the same custom background was used throughout the level for more than half the level. There was also a lot of copy-and-paste as well, like the blocks and lasers. Even with the custom background, it is still lacking decoration. If the custom background was removed, then this level would be like a 1.1/1.2 level (only last 70% of level). The only decorations (other than what is already mentioned) that I could find were gears, arrows, and stars. I would consider adding more decoration to help make this level more decorative. Decoration was mostly copy-and-paste and unchanging. 5/10. Gameplay: Gameplay was fine, for a two star level. My main concern is that the difficulty near the end was higher than the rest of the level. The ship part and the wave part was at a three star difficulty. It would be better to keep everything at a consistent difficulty. Usually I wouldn't mention this ramp in difficulty, but these two parts seemed too hard for a two star level. Another minor thing is that the gameplay looked a bit too uninteresting. I know that this is an easy level, but there are several parts in the first 50% where you don't do anything for seconds. Other than that, gameplay was good. 8/10 Music Sync: Good music sync, except one thing. I think that this sync was intentional, but to me, the transition between 70% to 71% looked early. Other than that, the sync was great. Everything sync very well, like the transitions and the timings. It fit so well in this map. Good job  9.5/10 Overall, this level is decent, but the decoration should be worked on a bit more, and there should be more designs in the level. (4/10+5/10+8/10+9.5/10)/4=6.625/10 =Decent Levels |
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Post by Mechanguis on Jan 6, 2016 4:41:29 GMT -5
Design: The design was too repetitive. I wasn't very fond of the flashing colors at the beginning. Those colors were a bit too bright. Other than that, the beginning looked good. However, the main problem was that this level looked way too simple. Starting from 33%, the design was the same throughout, which is a problem because it would be nicer to have a few different designs or backgrounds instead of just two in the entire level. There really isn't much more I can say, because I basically talked about the entire level. Overall, this design got dull very quickly because of lack of design change throughout the level. 4/10. Decoration: The decoration was mostly like the design. The first 30% percent of the level was alright, but the rest of the level was not very good. I'm not saying that the decoration was bad. It's just that the same custom background was used throughout the level for more than half the level. There was also a lot of copy-and-paste as well, like the blocks and lasers. Even with the custom background, it is still lacking decoration. If the custom background was removed, then this level would be like a 1.1/1.2 level (only last 70% of level). The only decorations (other than what is already mentioned) that I could find were gears, arrows, and stars. I would consider adding more decoration to help make this level more decorative. Decoration was mostly copy-and-paste and unchanging. 5/10. Gameplay: Gameplay was fine, for a two star level. My main concern is that the difficulty near the end was higher than the rest of the level. The ship part and the wave part was at a three star difficulty. It would be better to keep everything at a consistent difficulty. Usually I wouldn't mention this ramp in difficulty, but these two parts seemed too hard for a two star level. Another minor thing is that the gameplay looked a bit too uninteresting. I know that this is an easy level, but there are several parts in the first 50% where you don't do anything for seconds. Other than that, gameplay was good. 8/10 Music Sync: Good music sync, except one thing. I think that this sync was intentional, but to me, the transition between 70% to 71% looked early. Other than that, the sync was great. Everything sync very well, like the transitions and the timings. It fit so well in this map. Good job 9.5/10 Overall, this level is decent, but the decoration should be worked on a bit more, and there should be more designs in the level. (4/10+5/10+8/10+9.5/10)/4=6.625/10 =Decent Levels Yup, my thoughts exactly. There is a bit too much copy-pasting after the first 33% of the level. Moved to Decent.
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