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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2015 21:36:52 GMT -5
Last level of the year  NAME - FirePower
ID - 15440532
Creators - OwenC/EndLevel
Length - Long
Rating - 9 or 10 stars
Object Count - 11k
Video of Verification
oh and to Viceroy , I took your advice about making levels with better music sync 
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Post by benjamaster7 on Dec 31, 2015 23:50:22 GMT -5
PROS:
Nice flame effects
Nice glow effects
Nice music sync for the most part
Nice background effect at the start
CONS:
Bad music sync in SOME areas
A bit empty
Many invisible portals
Messed up part in 64%
Short level
Repetitive theme
Maybe decent @judges ?
I'm no level judge so don't take advice from me.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2015 23:59:17 GMT -5
Thanks for the Review, can you explain some parts better like Repetitive theme and invisible portals?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2016 0:55:14 GMT -5
Thanks for the Review, can you explain some parts better like Repetitive theme and invisible portals? Invisible Portals are when you change the Alpha value on a portal or necessary pad/orb to make it invisible meaning the player won't know what it coming up. Repetitive themes are frequently used themes which are generally quite unoriginal. (I'm not criticising your level at this point I'm just telling you what those terms mean ) |
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Post by NiTro451 on Jan 1, 2016 12:08:01 GMT -5
Moved to Decent
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2016 15:25:32 GMT -5
NiTro451 silmaril benjamaster7 ViceroyUpdated the Level, Made it longer and less empty and fit the music even better. Oh, and I made it ALOT harder, trust me here (350 Attempts to Verify this Version)
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Post by . on Jan 3, 2016 6:10:28 GMT -5
(2nd version) Gameplay: Wasn't bad actually. I likes the wave drop part, so fun But there are extra orbs those aren't touched. You need to remove the orbs those are don't touched to make it look better lol. And so much auto parts but they are for the music so I will skip it. Also some repetitive parts (especially in the pre-drop cube part). So I'd say it's decent. 4.8/10 Decorations and effects. Liked the effects in the start but that fire deco + glow blocks are so repetitive. Also no blending :/ and also no bg deco at all... 4/10 Music sync. It was neat but some parts which were not synced that good. Anyways it was still nice tho. 8/10 Design: very simple "1.9" ish design, well mixed with 2.0 features. 7/10 Overall: 23.08/40 Borderline good but closer to decent The real problem of this level was no blending and pretty poor deco. Add blending to all your colors and add more deco in the background. It should look very nice. (Don't overuse the deco though) All I gotta say is: needs improvement a bit! Good luck in da future bro. If I was RobTop I would give you stars when you improve it. |
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Post by Deleted on Jan 3, 2016 14:58:20 GMT -5
Updated the Level a Third Time Did everything that . said would be good (Blending, Backrounds, etc.) (oh and thanks for pointing out that it looked like a 1.9 level, thats what I was going for ) |
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Post by . on Jan 4, 2016 1:59:10 GMT -5
Now looks even better +4 27.08/40 Good The improvement is not ideal, but it's cool. You added blending and now it looks even better, right? EndLevel |
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