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Post by skylighter on Dec 28, 2015 4:09:02 GMT -5
I wanted to post my friend's level here (which is "The Catalyst Game"), and it's his most recent level (and he's new in creating). Made in 2.0. ID: 14733903 I have two versions of this level, and both are in practice mode because this level is almost four minutes long and I don't want to spend hundreds of attempts trying to beat this. Cut version in practice mode: www.youtube.com/watch?v=R3QFGehZ8b4Full Practice Run (this video shows the bugs): www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0NEwlGTV5UIf you have the time, I would suggest a detailed review, because this advice is going to help him make better maps and understand how to make a good level. Viceroy Mechanguis Cheeseman ~Pear~ Geometry Dash Chaozmegaman9
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Post by Deleted on Dec 28, 2015 14:07:09 GMT -5
The Catalyst Game by lolvondon
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Decoration | Music Sync | Judging from the video, it kind of seems like your friend doesn't really care too much about this. It is virtually non-existant, and adding on to that, the song ends before the level does. |
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Style | This looks a lot like your average 'Recent' list level, but longer. Level is extremely messy and underdecorated, and doesn't seem to have much effort put into. Decoration sometimes comes up in the level randomly, and doesn't look too good overall. Block choice is bad in some places too. | Color Choice | Not good. The background randomly flashes, while foreground colors don't match when they're even used. | Gameplay |
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Fun-ness | Triple bossfight. The level is quite empty and sometimes is unexpected, with obstacles coming up at random corners with blocks coming from the left and gears popping out from the sides...
Otherwise,the level is pretty expected and is good in terms of gameplay. | Difficulty Consistency | Stays at a relatively easy difficulty. | Non-auto-ness | Random auto parts appear, but are intended only at the beginning. Also, that bug you showed, where you can go through the spikes in the mini-UFO part, may count towards 'auto-ness,' too. | Overall (2/10) | A very messy level with bare decoration, with gameplay looking pretty buggy and quite trolly as well. Your friend should take some time to practice making good levels, but for a brand new creator, he got the hang of triggers pretty easily. This'll go into the Needs Improvement section for now, however this is only the start for him; I'm sure he'll get better soon! |
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Post by ~Pear~ on Dec 28, 2015 15:54:40 GMT -5
The Catalyst Game by lolvondon
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Decoration | Music Sync | Judging from the video, it kind of seems like your friend doesn't really care too much about this. It is virtually non-existant, and adding on to that, the song ends before the level does. |
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Style | This looks a lot like your average 'Recent' list level, but longer. Level is extremely messy and underdecorated, and doesn't seem to have much effort put into. Decoration sometimes comes up in the level randomly, and doesn't look too good overall. Block choice is bad in some places too. | Color Choice | Not good. The background randomly flashes, while foreground colors don't match when they're even used. | Gameplay |
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Fun-ness | Triple bossfight. The level is quite empty and sometimes is unexpected, with obstacles coming up at random corners with blocks coming from the left and gears popping out from the sides...
Otherwise,the level is pretty expected and is good in terms of gameplay. | Difficulty Consistency | Stays at a relatively easy difficulty. | Non-auto-ness | Random auto parts appear, but are intended only at the beginning. Also, that bug you showed, where you can go through the spikes in the mini-UFO part, may count towards 'auto-ness,' too. | Overall (2/10) | A very messy level with bare decoration, with gameplay looking pretty buggy and quite trolly as well. Your friend should take some time to practice making good levels, but for a brand new creator, he got the hang of triggers pretty easily. This'll go into the Needs Improvement section for now, however this is only the start for him; I'm sure he'll get better soon! |
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review approved
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Post by skylighter on Dec 28, 2015 16:02:47 GMT -5
Thanks for your review
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