63 posts
Favorite Level: Demon Vole IV
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Post by Lopaha on Dec 26, 2015 15:43:19 GMT -5
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Post by skylighter on Dec 27, 2015 1:09:48 GMT -5
I'm not an official level judge. I know that you are new at mapping but I'm going to rate this like a normal level. Design: I disliked certain parts of the design. This level would be all right in 1.0 or 1.1 (excluding the buzzsaws), but this is 2.0. You literally spammed the first block throughout the entire level, and some of the parts of the level look strange, like the "70% to 79%" part. There are some decorations out of place, and this affects the score for this level. I would say something about the background almost never changing, but here, the background color and the blocks actually matched and look fine. However, I could see huge amounts of copy-and-paste throughout the level, and this factor dropped your score by a lot. Overall, the design isn't great, and it's because there are many weird combinations in this level. 0.5/2.5 Decoration: Decoration was just copy-and-paste everywhere, and it was a little less than a disaster. The only decorations are arrows, stars, swirls, and the glow from 49% to 59%. It looked like you spammed the copy-and-paste button and put stars everywhere. It would be somewhat OK if there weren't as many stars, but here, there are way too many, and because of this, this affects the design. Also, I didn't like the idea of using swirls as portals. Here, it's hard to tell which vehicle is used because the colors of the portals (swirls) all look the same. Even with the stars and those decorations, the level still looks bare. I would consider adding new decorations for each part of the level (Ship, UFO, Cube, etc). Anyways, the decoration was bland and was 100% copy-and-paste. However, I'm giving you a score because there is actual decoration. 0.3/2 Gameplay: The gameplay looked a little boring. It didn't feel like it matched with the song. It just didn't look/feel as intense as it should have been. This song would be fitted for a very fast pace level. Here's an example of this song in a fast level, and here the song suits the gameplay. I'm not saying that you need to make the level as hard as that, I just think that speeding your level up would make the gameplay more exciting. www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCaUZ7_19_YAlso, the gameplay looked repetitive on some parts of the level, like the first UFO part and the first ship part, and this is mainly because of the copy-and-paste issue from before. It's mainly because of this that your gameplay score dropped by half a point. The good parts of the gameplay were that the difficulty stayed consistent throughout the level, and the level didn't look like it had any bugs. The only main thing that could be better was the intensity of the gameplay. 3.2/4.5 Music Sync: The music sync was OK, but on most of the transitions the sync was off by a little bit. The sync on the cube part was off throughout this part. 0.5/1 Overall, this level needs some improvement. There's too much copy-and-paste in this level and this is what brought down your overall score. I know that you started mapping a month ago, and for that amount of time this level isn't bad, but compared to most 2.0 levels today, this isn't that great. You'll get better as you map more, and it's perfectly normal to get a low score the first few times you make a map. I would put this map in the "Need Improvement" section. 4.5/10
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Post by skylighter on Dec 27, 2015 17:36:16 GMT -5
/summon Cheeseman Cinereal Geometry Dash Chaoz Grideos IIRustamII Jumpyhead megaman9 Asriel Dreemurr WillFlame zenthicxeno
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Post by t on Dec 27, 2015 17:53:45 GMT -5
@judges
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Post by Viceroy on Dec 27, 2015 17:57:29 GMT -5
The @ judges command doesn't work Just tag me @ nalor W/o the space of course. I'll always get back to you in a quick manner. Quite the review, Skylighter! Approved
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