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Post by erikas0012 on Dec 26, 2015 5:51:54 GMT -5
Hey there,new user here.Been playing the game for 2 months now,decided to make a level. The ID is: 14930703 Of course I know it's horrible,I just want to know what people think about it.I'm LEARNING. (No video because PC sucks) Attachment DeletedAttachment Deleted
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Post by Mechanguis on Jan 4, 2016 0:35:15 GMT -5
Here's my review. Decorations: where the hell is it? You need to add decorations to your level but don't just spam they around. Place them in good places. 0.1/2 Design: bad block complication and starts with standard bg, there a lot of better bg, be sure to use them. Also Learn how to use other forms of blocks, not just the 4-line block form, also 3, 2,1 line block form. And only use 4-line block form if the block is alone and not connected to blocks. 0.2/2 Gameplay: very buggy and so much annoying auto parts that make the gameplay very bad. Delete those auto parts and make more jump orbs and also some more portals. But I liked the jump pads to the portal, it looked very good. And liked the 2x speed usage, makes the gameplay fun. 0.8/2 Music sync: ABSOLUTELY no music sync and very bad music choice for GD. I bet you just choose a random song on NewGrounds without even listening to it, also this music is unthemed for GD. 0.0/1 Personal opinion: it has got boring slow gameplay in the first part. In the 2nd it's a bit better though. 1.0/3 Overall: 2.2/10 needs Improvement. But this is not too bad a first level, everyone starts out like this so don't worry and watch some tutorial videos, it really helped me when I was a new creator. Good luck in the future! Approved. Here are some points for improvement (deco only): - Use other backgrounds too!
- Use other blocks too, not just 1.0 blocks and spikes
- Don't spam sawblades, always make the positioning look organized.
- Don't make the BG change into many different colors too quickly. Also, when changing the BG color, use Fade Time to make it look smoother.
- Don't use floor clouds like normal cloud deco!
- Add spike floors and spike floor decorations
- Don't only use the block with outlines on all 4 sides, try using the blocks with only outlines on the top, left and right, top and left, etc. to make the structures look nicer
- Add background deco such as pulsing objects, hanging deco, cloud deco, wheels, etc. The level feels empty!
- Use lots of colors. This is 2.0, we have infinite colors channels.
Moved to Needs Improvement.
erikas0012
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