eyal282
Stereo Madness
The best level I've ever created: Trap Door (ID: 14764094). The only way outside is the death room.
20 posts
Favorite Level: Trap Door by Liar
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Post by eyal282 on Dec 13, 2015 14:11:04 GMT -5
Level was remade Level name: Trap Door Level ID: 15506477 Difficulty: 3-4 stars ( Normal / Hard ) This level contains secret stuff that require you to be very cleaver and you need to notice everything to survive this level. I think this level can be featured because it contains a different type of gameplay. I will soon show a video. BTW, I don't know how to use effects and decorations, hope it won't hurt my chances to get the level starred / featured. Edit: Here is the video: everyplay.com/videos/24571960This is another video of the death room - the place where you go to after you fall / touch spikes: everyplay.com/videos/23729587
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Post by Rythm~ on Dec 13, 2015 14:19:24 GMT -5
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Post by Viceroy on Dec 13, 2015 14:25:19 GMT -5
fuk u. Not even going to dignify this level with a review. Sorry friend, but you need to work A LOT more before making a level in Geometry Dash.
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Favorite Level: ????
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Post by Rythm~ on Dec 13, 2015 18:22:52 GMT -5
im sorry for sarcasm,i just was having a bad day Viceroy. tho lvl wasnt mine.
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Post by Viceroy on Dec 13, 2015 19:19:20 GMT -5
im sorry for sarcasm,i just was having a bad day Viceroy . tho lvl wasnt mine. The 2nd part of my post was directed at the creator, not you XD
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eyal282
Stereo Madness
The best level I've ever created: Trap Door (ID: 14764094). The only way outside is the death room.
20 posts
Favorite Level: Trap Door by Liar
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Post by eyal282 on Dec 14, 2015 4:10:44 GMT -5
What is bad with the level?
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Post by Mechanguis on Dec 14, 2015 5:59:42 GMT -5
1) Little to no deco. The level feels very empty. 2) Boring gameplay. No use of jump pads, sawblades, mini or speed portals, etc. 3) Concept is interesting but is poorly executed. 4) Only the default block, spike, and breakable blocks were used. There are plenty of other blocks as well... 5) No music sync 6) The BG is the default one, even though there are lots of more interesting backgrounds. The BG changes are also abrupt. Use fade time for BG changes so that the transitions are smoother.
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eyal282
Stereo Madness
The best level I've ever created: Trap Door (ID: 14764094). The only way outside is the death room.
20 posts
Favorite Level: Trap Door by Liar
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Post by eyal282 on Dec 14, 2015 6:10:28 GMT -5
1) Little to no deco. The level feels very empty. 2) Boring gameplay. No use of jump pads, sawblades, mini or speed portals, etc. 3) Concept is interesting but is poorly executed. 4) Only the default block, spike, and breakable blocks were used. There are plenty of other blocks as well... 5) No music sync 6) The BG is the default one, even though there are lots of more interesting backgrounds. The BG changes are also abrupt. Use fade time for BG changes so that the transitions are smoother. I don't know how to decorate anything, not sure how it is done at all.
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Post by . on Dec 14, 2015 6:19:42 GMT -5
Then you need to learn, look at TriAxis creator school, it helped me to learn how to make good/feature-worthy levels. You level is very empty, not just the deco, the gameplay is empty. Make the gameplay more fun and add more transformation portals.
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eyal282
Stereo Madness
The best level I've ever created: Trap Door (ID: 14764094). The only way outside is the death room.
20 posts
Favorite Level: Trap Door by Liar
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Post by eyal282 on Dec 14, 2015 6:22:40 GMT -5
Then you need to learn, look at TriAxis creator school, it helped me to learn how to make good/feature-worthy levels. You level is very empty, not just the deco, the gameplay is empty. Make the gameplay more fun and add more transformation portals. I will think on ideas to change the gameplay, about adding more transformation portals it's extremely hard because the way the game is built, check what happens when you die, it's almost impossible to add for example the wave transformation.
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Post by Mechanguis on Dec 14, 2015 6:37:30 GMT -5
1) Little to no deco. The level feels very empty. 2) Boring gameplay. No use of jump pads, sawblades, mini or speed portals, etc. 3) Concept is interesting but is poorly executed. 4) Only the default block, spike, and breakable blocks were used. There are plenty of other blocks as well... 5) No music sync 6) The BG is the default one, even though there are lots of more interesting backgrounds. The BG changes are also abrupt. Use fade time for BG changes so that the transitions are smoother. I don't know how to decorate anything, not sure how it is done at all. It mostly just involves going to well-decorated official levels, seeing what looks good and what fits your level, and then try to implement the deco in your level. Good deco should look organized and make the level feel "full".
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eyal282
Stereo Madness
The best level I've ever created: Trap Door (ID: 14764094). The only way outside is the death room.
20 posts
Favorite Level: Trap Door by Liar
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Post by eyal282 on Dec 14, 2015 6:45:42 GMT -5
I don't know how to decorate anything, not sure how it is done at all. It mostly just involves going to well-decorated official levels, seeing what looks good and what fits your level, and then try to implement the deco in your level. Good deco should look organized and make the level feel "full". I don't wanna copy, I just want ideas.
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Post by Mechanguis on Dec 14, 2015 7:37:55 GMT -5
It mostly just involves going to well-decorated official levels, seeing what looks good and what fits your level, and then try to implement the deco in your level. Good deco should look organized and make the level feel "full". I don't wanna copy, I just want ideas. Ok, I messed up what I was trying to say >_<. Basically, you learn to make good deco by looking at official levels which have good deco. Try to figure out what makes the level look pretty and well designed. Then, try to implement these into your level. Don't exactly copy-paste, just try to follow their style. Then, once you get the hang of it, try to do deco on your own. I'm not good at explaining this aren't I
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eyal282
Stereo Madness
The best level I've ever created: Trap Door (ID: 14764094). The only way outside is the death room.
20 posts
Favorite Level: Trap Door by Liar
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Post by eyal282 on Dec 14, 2015 7:41:45 GMT -5
I don't wanna copy, I just want ideas. Ok, I messed up what I was trying to say >_<. Basically, you learn to make good deco by looking at official levels which have good deco. Try to figure out what makes the level look pretty and well designed. Then, try to implement these into your level. Don't exactly copy-paste, just try to follow their style. Then, once you get the hang of it, try to do deco on your own. I'm not good at explaining this aren't I Also, I have a different issue. I am trying to cause the coin to be collected when the glass breaks. The scale of the coin is 0.50, the scale of the point where the glass breaks is 0.85, how to sync it? Forgot to mention, the coin is inside the glass.
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280 posts
Favorite Level: Deadlocked
Hardest Demon: e6a419
Mini-Profile Background: 19e69c
Mini-Profile Name Color: {"image":"","color":"46236e"}
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Post by . on Dec 14, 2015 12:12:24 GMT -5
It does not matter how much effort you do on your level, I can copy-paste a block 30000 times and my finger will die and then I will say I put very much effort on my level. XD Make a simple design if you don't know how to use decorations, just clouds if you want. But don't overdecorate (don't place a decoration on every block in the edtor ). Official levels have got simple design, you can learn from them. Your level is just empty, make the gameplay more fun and use another design. Even Stereo Madness wasn't that empty. But you can always update the level and we can rejudge it. Good luck, don't stop creating And please don't take it as an insult, we are just supporting you
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