|
Post by leopotion on Sept 2, 2022 9:08:20 GMT -5
Hello judges! This is my second level Name:Anthem of Stellars ID: 83338151 Made by :Leopotion Lenght :1m 2sec Song :Sky fortress by waterflame
I hope ypu enjoy!
|
|
|
Post by jayz1 on Sept 2, 2022 19:12:35 GMT -5
I've pretty much given all I can give considering gameplay when I reviewed the layout for the level. However, the gameplay after 75% seems really rushed and spammy. It's more annoying than anything, same with the transition at 75%. That completely blind transition isn't even a little complimented by a considerable amount of time for the player to get readjusted to the gameplay. Never do something like that again. It is easily the worst part of the level and really makes the last fourth seem a lot more awful than it is.
Decoration wise, a lot of it seemed to just be random patterns. Not really any general theme. And that spinning thing at like 25% is more of an eye sore rather than decoration. If it worked properly, it'd look a lot better. To add insult to injury, the decoration after 75% also just seems really rushed. It doesn't really fit anywhere in this level. I think if the decoration did more than just move around sporadically in some parts and just sit still in other parts, it'd make the level feel whole. Rather than just a bunch of random ideas lumped together.
Other than that I think it was a decent level with decent decoration. Would need a lot of work for a rate, though.
|
|