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Post by 6359_ on Apr 12, 2016 13:09:22 GMT -5
18837116 is the ID Here's the first 1:30 (an old sneak peek)
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Post by Deleted on Apr 12, 2016 21:21:17 GMT -5
I really like this level. Gameplay: Really fun! The transitions give you just enough time to react, and the fast pace gameplay is really enjoyable! However, the 2nd cube section and the final mini-cube section is really quite boring. Nonetheless, great gameplay! 4.3/5 Decoration: Nice and simple, easy to look at. The moving saws and such also make the scenery better, and the block design is nicely done. However, as mention in the Gameplay section, the 2nd cube and the final mini-cube is quite boring. Add some clouds? Or some other decoration? Both would be great. However, due to the length of the level, I can make an exception, seeing as how the rest of the level is just so nicely decorated. 4.1/5 Originality: Really original concepts here, with the moving sawblades section and such. Creative coin placement too! 3.2/5 Atmosphere: Feels old school, but at the same time really futuristic. Great. 4.6/5 Music Sync: Perfect. 4.9/5 Total score is 21.1/25 or 84.4/100. Belongs in Feature-Worthy section.
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Post by DaxD0w on Apr 12, 2016 21:23:45 GMT -5
Since there is no % on the progress bar, I have to switch this up This is my first time doing this so this might be a bad review SORRY if this sucks. First Cube: Starting off with detail. Detail is good. I like how you added that little glowing thingy inside the blocks. Pretty original. The only time i have seen that is from 8o. Instead of having the "Hiding" secret coin with no indication of where it is, add some stars or something else that kind of indicates where the user coin is. Music sync is decent. There are some sync here and there. Mostly on the spike jumps, not the object and saw ones. This music has a clear places to put sync here and there but I guess you didn't decide to put them. Gameplay is also decent. It isn't too fun but not too boring either. This looks nearly 100% original. Good job thinking your OWN imaginations into this. First Ship: Ill start off with music sync since that is my first thing i see. I love the coming beat. I didn't notice but after coming there a few times i noticed that there was sync going up and down. Your ship goes up while the music is louder and you go down as it's silent. Good job doing that. Detail is good I guess. I was going to say decent but you were lucky today. Instead having just plain saws, you put some other things there which totally stands out this part. You also made the user coin visible, although it seems very difficult to see. I went passed it more than twice. Gameplay is very fun in here. The music beat is really clear. Like it fits the level. TBH I think this is my favourite part in this level. First UFO: Detail is nearly the same stuff. So I will say it will be good. What you could have done is add a bit more detail. Not to make it messy but such as stars would fit it since this is kind of night type style? Music sync? This is done really well in this part. You go up as the music goes. This matches almost perfect with the sync. Gameplay doesn't look so bad either. Again, with this music, it is very enjoyable. However, I did die here a couple times with the green orbs. But other than that, it is very fun. First Ball: Detail again is the same here. But what i did notice is 3D blocks. I don't know if I just noticed that now but I first saw 3D stuff here. Orbs are decorated on the outside. Oh I missed a bunch. The line thingy that tells where the object moves. That just makes gameplay a whole lot easier. At least for me. Music sync is NEARLY perfect. Going on orbs and changing gravity matching the beat of the music. Gameplay is fun here. But again, i did die at the green orb. Which is clearly not going to take a mark off the gameplay, because its the game problem although what i might suggest is to make the spike lower so there is possibly no way you glitch the green orb so you die. First Robot: Detail has changed here, Not too much or too little but just in the middle. You used more other types of blocks which is what i like to see. I also noticed 3D slopes. Good job carrying on with that. Music sync is done very well again. Although some parts are missing sync, but like a centimetre off a metre. Gameplay is very fun here. And all through out the rest of this level. First Wave: Detail changed just a LITTLE BIT (see what i did there haha.) I didn't notice that there were 3D slopes here as well. TBH doing 3D slopes on a triangle type of object is one of the hardest things to do when doing 3D objects. I also like how you didn't add the pink thingys inside the triangles all the way touching the outer stuff. Why? Because it would look messy. Music sync is done well again. You match the wave along with the beat. Gameplay is my favourite part in this level. Why? Because i find the wave the most fun gameplay in most levels. Skipped the Cube part since there is no point of doing it there.
Second UFO: Detail is nearly the same until i saw the shining circling thingy on some places. Also, the saws look decorated EVEN MORE! You did a different type of ground this time also. I noticed that too. Music sync is near perfect again. Just missing like a LITTLE BIT (See what i did there again haha) near the end before entering the portal. You did a very good job doing sync through out this whole level. Gameplay is fun again. Very very enjoyable with the music you included here. Also skipped the ship part since there is no point again since it's like a second.
Second Cube: Detail is done well here again. Although the green orb switching thing looks messy. The X's just kind of messes it up. Though it is good for gameplay so you know which orbs to do on but some how it looks a bit messy. The shooting lazer thing is VERY COOL! I did not expect that at all. Music sync is done very well again. Matching the green orb switching part. Gameplay is very amazing as usual. Though the green orb thing looks very confusing but since you added the X's on it, it makes it less confusing so thanks. Detail: 8/10 This is done very well. Lots of decorations nearly everywhere. What i suggest is STARS! It would be pretty cool and would make it look a bit more detailed with stars. Overall you did well with detail so the design of this level looks better. Music Sync: 9/10 Nearly every part in this whole level has sync in it. Some parts can have sync but I guess you didn't decide to add them. So this part is nearly perfect. If there were sync in the spots that were possibly addable sync parts, it would be instant 10/10. Gameplay: 9/10 The beginning parts were just decent until the robot part. I thought this music was just like going along with the beginning parts but it changed. Again my favourite gameplay place was the wave. I had so much fun doing that part. OVERALL: 8.6/10 This level is throughout very well done. If you are going to finish this, please add stars. It would look even better so it looks more detailed. Otherwise, this level is super well done. DEFINITELY FEATURE WORTHY! Requesting to move this to Feature Worthy or sneak peeks section. Possibly am i wrong? kiriE TimeLink Oh and i think this is my new most detailed review. I had 1175 words D:
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Post by Viceroy on Apr 12, 2016 22:08:13 GMT -5
Howdy 6359 c: Pretty noice stuff you got goin on here. Unfortunately, I'm terrible at games, so I wasn't able to complete the level in normal mode, so I just used the video to grade on music sync. Hopefully that doesn't mess up my review... Let's get right into it 8) Gameplay: 9/10Simplistic, but effective. The gameplay looked very fun, and a good pace was kept throughout, mostly. Some areas were a tad slow, however. For instance, the cube immediately after the drop didn't have much going on with it. I understand that there isn't much going on with the song, but I'm sure something else could have been done there. Decoration: 7.5/10The deco was also quite simplistic and 1.9-y. But maybe too simplistic? Some areas were extremely empty, like the ending. I also noticed some copy paste. I think more effort could be put into this, despite the fact that it is a 1.9-y level as you said yourself. The deco that is there, however, functions quite well! I like how you kept a theme throughout, color-wise. Good color choices. Music sync: 9/10This was also very good! Some parts were done perfectly, like the UFO at 1:03 in the video. I still think you could have gone a bit further with it. But still, well done here. 8.5/10 Feature-worthy.A good, nostalgic level that keeps an excellent theme of simplicity throughout, but falls short in terms of decoration.8 Insane
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Post by 6359_ on Apr 13, 2016 9:37:00 GMT -5
A full video
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Post by Retired moderator. on Apr 14, 2016 0:32:16 GMT -5
Howdy 6359 c: Pretty noice stuff you got goin on here. Unfortunately, I'm terrible at games, so I wasn't able to complete the level in normal mode, so I just used the video to grade on music sync. Hopefully that doesn't mess up my review... Let's get right into it 8) Gameplay: 9/10 Simplistic, but effective. The gameplay looked very fun, and a good pace was kept throughout, mostly. Some areas were a tad slow, however.
8 Insane
hold on, what?
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Post by Viceroy on Apr 14, 2016 18:05:40 GMT -5
Howdy 6359 c: Pretty noice stuff you got goin on here. Unfortunately, I'm terrible at games, so I wasn't able to complete the level in normal mode, so I just used the video to grade on music sync. Hopefully that doesn't mess up my review... Let's get right into it 8) Gameplay: 9/10 Simplistic, but effective. The gameplay looked very fun, and a good pace was kept throughout, mostly. Some areas were a tad slow, however.
8 Insane
hold on, what? i played the level in practice, I just accidentally put "looked" because I watched the video also -.- do you want a god-damn screenshot or what? I'm sick of you always complaining about everything. Are you telling me I have to complete every level I judge in normal mode to grade it? No. **** you. Thanks. Would you rather I didn't grade on music sync at all, and have all that effort put to waste? You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer. So, kind sir, refrain from being such an uptight spewer of criticism. EDIT: Sorry for the extreme saltiness (I haven't been this salty in a loooong time), but it's still justly deserved in my opinion. I mean really. There's no need to constantly bother people about what they do, or just point out flaws in other things. This goes back to those threads you made about "level critiques" which were basically just saying how you disliked a level. Yeah, so what? Do we really need a thread saying all the reasons you don't like Motion? Lighten up.
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Post by ~Pear~ on Apr 14, 2016 18:52:32 GMT -5
i played the level in practice, I just accidentally put "looked" because I watched the video also -.- do you want a god-damn screenshot or what? I'm sick of you always complaining about everything. Are you telling me I have to complete every level I judge in normal mode to grade it? No. **** you. Thanks. Would you rather I didn't grade on music sync at all, and have all that effort put to waste? You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer. So, kind sir, refrain from being such an uptight spewer of criticism. EDIT: Sorry for the extreme saltiness (I haven't been this salty in a loooong time), but it's still justly deserved in my opinion. I mean really. There's no need to constantly bother people about what they do, or just point out flaws in other things. This goes back to those threads you made about "level critiques" which were basically just saying how you disliked a level. Yeah, so what? Do we really need a thread saying all the reasons you don't like Motion? Lighten up. He actually has a point. Instead of flaming people that criticize your reviews, maybe listen to them? Also, being a judge for longer doesn't give you ANY authority.
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Post by Viceroy on Apr 14, 2016 19:05:47 GMT -5
i played the level in practice, I just accidentally put "looked" because I watched the video also -.- do you want a god-damn screenshot or what? I'm sick of you always complaining about everything. Are you telling me I have to complete every level I judge in normal mode to grade it? No. **** you. Thanks. Would you rather I didn't grade on music sync at all, and have all that effort put to waste? You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer. So, kind sir, refrain from being such an uptight spewer of criticism. EDIT: Sorry for the extreme saltiness (I haven't been this salty in a loooong time), but it's still justly deserved in my opinion. I mean really. There's no need to constantly bother people about what they do, or just point out flaws in other things. This goes back to those threads you made about "level critiques" which were basically just saying how you disliked a level. Yeah, so what? Do we really need a thread saying all the reasons you don't like Motion? Lighten up. He actually has a point. Instead of flaming people that criticize your reviews, maybe listen to them? Also, being a judge for longer doesn't give you ANY authority. What's his point? He said 3 words. And about the "being a judge for longer" thing, it just means I've reviewed more levels than he has, giving me experience. I dunno, I had to release my salt somewhere 8) Hopefully it won't happen again for a while
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Post by Retired moderator. on Apr 14, 2016 20:03:24 GMT -5
i played the level in practice, I just accidentally put "looked" because I watched the video also -.- do you want a god-damn screenshot or what? I'm sick of you always complaining about everything. Are you telling me I have to complete every level I judge in normal mode to grade it? No. **** you. Thanks. Would you rather I didn't grade on music sync at all, and have all that effort put to waste? You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer. So, kind sir, refrain from being such an uptight spewer of criticism. EDIT: Sorry for the extreme saltiness (I haven't been this salty in a loooong time), but it's still justly deserved in my opinion. I mean really. There's no need to constantly bother people about what they do, or just point out flaws in other things. This goes back to those threads you made about "level critiques" which were basically just saying how you disliked a level. Yeah, so what? Do we really need a thread saying all the reasons you don't like Motion? Lighten up. It was a joke. Chill. I wasnt being serious. Just making a little fun out of your mistake.
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Post by Fimatic on Apr 15, 2016 0:53:49 GMT -5
i played the level in practice, I just accidentally put "looked" because I watched the video also -.- do you want a god-damn screenshot or what? I'm sick of you always complaining about everything. Are you telling me I have to complete every level I judge in normal mode to grade it? No. **** you. Thanks. Would you rather I didn't grade on music sync at all, and have all that effort put to waste? You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer. So, kind sir, refrain from being such an uptight spewer of criticism. EDIT: Sorry for the extreme saltiness (I haven't been this salty in a loooong time), but it's still justly deserved in my opinion. I mean really. There's no need to constantly bother people about what they do, or just point out flaws in other things. This goes back to those threads you made about "level critiques" which were basically just saying how you disliked a level. Yeah, so what? Do we really need a thread saying all the reasons you don't like Motion? Lighten up.mfw
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Post by Retired moderator. on Apr 15, 2016 3:45:05 GMT -5
i played the level in practice, I just accidentally put "looked" because I watched the video also -.- do you want a god-damn screenshot or what? I'm sick of you always complaining about everything. Are you telling me I have to complete every level I judge in normal mode to grade it? No. **** you. Thanks. Would you rather I didn't grade on music sync at all, and have all that effort put to waste? You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer. So, kind sir, refrain from being such an uptight spewer of criticism. EDIT: Sorry for the extreme saltiness (I haven't been this salty in a loooong time), but it's still justly deserved in my opinion. I mean really. There's no need to constantly bother people about what they do, or just point out flaws in other things. This goes back to those threads you made about "level critiques" which were basically just saying how you disliked a level. Yeah, so what? Do we really need a thread saying all the reasons you don't like Motion? Lighten up. I know I already responded but, I need to say something. you can't take criticism. Like, at all. If someone says you should improve or give suggestions, you immediately ignore and hate on said person. I've probably given you criticism about once in that pm where you wrote the entire thing off as as me being "salty". I've seen multiple examples of this where you always say "You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer." Which means absolutely nothing.
this is is the reason why we have judge rules requiring detailed reviews and requiring detailed reviews and requiring a practice run. Yeah, I know you do that now. The above post was a joke.
Well, I wanted to see if there were others who shared my opinion and I wanted to see what others had to say for said opinion.
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Post by Viceroy on Apr 15, 2016 17:38:25 GMT -5
I know I already responded but, I need to say something. you can't take criticism. Like, at all. If someone says you should improve or give suggestions, you immediately ignore and hate on said person. I've probably given you criticism about once in that pm where you wrote the entire thing off as as me being "salty". I've seen multiple examples of this where you always say "You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer." Which means absolutely nothing.
this is is the reason why we have judge rules requiring detailed reviews and requiring detailed reviews and requiring a practice run. Yeah, I know you do that now. The above post was a joke.
Well, I wanted to see if there were others who shared my opinion and I wanted to see what others had to say for said opinion.
Nah, I'm only like that towards you
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Post by Retired moderator. on Apr 15, 2016 19:53:42 GMT -5
I know I already responded but, I need to say something. you can't take criticism. Like, at all. If someone says you should improve or give suggestions, you immediately ignore and hate on said person. I've probably given you criticism about once in that pm where you wrote the entire thing off as as me being "salty". I've seen multiple examples of this where you always say "You unfortunately don't have the power to tell me how I review. In fact, I was appointed judge before you were, which means I've been doing this a lot longer." Which means absolutely nothing.
this is is the reason why we have judge rules requiring detailed reviews and requiring detailed reviews and requiring a practice run. Yeah, I know you do that now. The above post was a joke.
Well, I wanted to see if there were others who shared my opinion and I wanted to see what others had to say for said opinion.
Nah, I'm only like that towards you Oh really? If you weren't lying, I'd be a little hurt, but, this: gdforum.freeforums.net/thread/16209/
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Post by Viceroy on Apr 15, 2016 19:58:21 GMT -5
tbh peridot too. I've had some shenanigans with him in PM really though, I don't get mad at many other people o3o)/
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