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Post by herobrine279 on Jan 26, 2020 9:14:24 GMT -5
Name: Dark Land Rebirth Creator: Herobrine279 ID: 59162449
So the other one is locked because of the new update, but now it’s ready to be judged! I had spent months planning and building this, I exceeded the block limit, and I have made it the best I’ll ever make. ENJOY!!
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Post by RFMX on Jan 30, 2020 2:03:57 GMT -5
I believe this level still suffers from shortcoming illustrated by Cień Świetności. Therefore, I'm not adding much. Check that thread here. (If you don't understand just ask him) Here are a few more tips though.
- 0%: Make credits at the END of the level, not the start of the level.
- 11%: People don't know that you should jump at the platform before the green orb. Although it should be clear if you are a GD physics expert or something, but most people are going to fall off the platform, bringing doom. Please, either mark jumps or redesign gameplay. - 13%: There is little reaction time at the robot section after the great leap. Ideally, 1s is needed to react with new obstacles. Give leeway, or people are going to memorise that part, which, in my opinion, is not a good thing. - starting at 19%: Spider is not designed to teleport between the ceiling and the ground, but to teleport between platforms. The reason why is that it is difficult to spread focus between the top and the bottom of the screen due to the distance. - 29%: Dual ball should not be like that, but most creator does that, so whatever. Do that if you want to, but beware that some people will not be satisfied. - 56%: I don't know if that's intentional, but the logo looks horrible after rotating. Make sure you rotate well. - Make extensive use of triggers, they are good. Real good, trust me.
Overall, Needs Improvement. Experience and experiment will always be useful. Good luck!
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Post by Dragon on Jan 30, 2020 18:56:17 GMT -5
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Favorite Level: Serponge
Hardest Demon: Serponge
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Post by _-_-_Ba g u e t te _-_--_ on Feb 14, 2020 11:04:35 GMT -5
It sucks ass, just like the vacuum cleaner up my anus.
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