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Favorite Level: Master of The World by Viprin and Terron
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Post by BanTategi on Oct 26, 2016 11:10:04 GMT -5
Level Name: Crossing Field ID: 26667375 Difficulty: 6-7* Harder Solo/Collab: Solo Creator: BanTategi Copyable: No
New Video:
Additional Notes:
I dedicated this level to a friend of mine, for her birthday on zoctober 26.
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182 posts
Discord: Fabman650#6828
Clans: Geometry Dash League
Creator Points: 2
Favorite Level: idk i really like'd old site in celeste
Hardest Demon: idk i can be pretty difficult sometimes
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Post by Fabby on Oct 26, 2016 16:30:12 GMT -5
REVIEW: Crossing FieldCreator: BanTategiOverviewOverall, this level was decent. I really enjoyed the gameplay of the level, although there was one transition that was slightly dodgy in my opinion, I'll talk about that in more detail in the Gameplay Segment. The design was decent in a lot of parts, one part still lacked BGOs here and there, but other than that the level was well decorated. One thing I thought really brought the level down was the difficulty - there were a few parts in the level that were significantly harder than all the others (this has been balanced out now). Despite all this, I thought that this was a decent level, and definitely deserves a rating by RobTop, but does have a decent chance of getting featured as well (You know what RobTop's like ) Gameplay - 8/10This level was really fun in my opinion, I really enjoyed playing it. However, there were one or two factors that brought this level down in terms of gameplay. The transition from the first cube to the first ship was a bit odd, as you'd end up screwing up your attempt if you jump right after passing through the teleportals, because your ship ends up crashing into the spike right at the start of the ship part. The blue gravi-portal at near the end of the first wave was slightly odd as well, as you could hit the graviportal and end up crashing into the ramp by accident because you accidentaly held the mouse button at the graviportal. Difficulty was balanced across all parts though, so well done with that. Design - 9/10I liked the design of this level, there was variety in each of the parts - it was obvious that he took some inspiration from other creators. The last wave part is still a little bit bland in my opinion, if you could add some BGOs then that would be really nice. Other than that, I really like the design, very nice, very innovative. Music Sync - 5/5Nothing much to say here - it was perfect. I found no flaws in the music sync. Total Score - 22/25Level Tier - Feature Worthy LevelsFinal Words + TipsI liked this level on the whole. At first I had some critiques on the level design as well as a few transitions and portal positioning, but it's nice to see that you've taken those critiques to make the level look even better, nice job. I'm glad that you took some inspiration from other creators' levels, that's how I started to develop my style and really experiment with different block designs to help put together a good level (Even though I never finsh any c:). Keep up the good work, keep using the techniques I've shown you, and next thing you know you'll be making amazing levels. I look forward to seeing what you create next. EDIT: The creator edited the level using some of the tips I noted. Scores have been altered. (Love that last ship part now, reminds me of one of my own projects... ) -Fabman650 /summon kiriE
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27 posts
Favorite Level: Master of The World by Viprin and Terron
Hardest Demon: ffffff
Mini-Profile Background: ffffff
Mini-Profile Name Color: https://files.graphiq.com/2307/media/images/t2/Royal_Blue_429677_i0.png
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Post by BanTategi on Oct 26, 2016 20:10:18 GMT -5
Fabby Thanks a lot for the review! I have tweaked some stuff in the level, and uploaded a new (4th) version of it. A video of it is attached on my first post in this thread.
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182 posts
Discord: Fabman650#6828
Clans: Geometry Dash League
Creator Points: 2
Favorite Level: idk i really like'd old site in celeste
Hardest Demon: idk i can be pretty difficult sometimes
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Post by Fabby on Oct 27, 2016 5:30:10 GMT -5
BanTategi Nice changes! Changed the scores a little bit
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27 posts
Favorite Level: Master of The World by Viprin and Terron
Hardest Demon: ffffff
Mini-Profile Background: ffffff
Mini-Profile Name Color: https://files.graphiq.com/2307/media/images/t2/Royal_Blue_429677_i0.png
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Post by BanTategi on Oct 27, 2016 6:07:22 GMT -5
BanTategi Nice changes! Changed the scores a little bit Thank you! I'm not quite sure how I should fix the wave part at the beginning yet; in the current version of the level, the area around the portal was nerfed, but I didn't really change the portal's position in between the obstacles, since it would ruin the timing. I also plan to change the final wave's background, but for now, I'm fresh out of ideas. Thanks, again!
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Post by traviss1 on Oct 27, 2016 19:41:13 GMT -5
REVIEW: Crossing FieldCreator: BanTategiOverviewOverall, this level was decent. I really enjoyed the gameplay of the level, although there was one transition that was slightly dodgy in my opinion, I'll talk about that in more detail in the Gameplay Segment. The design was decent in a lot of parts, one part still lacked BGOs here and there, but other than that the level was well decorated. One thing I thought really brought the level down was the difficulty - there were a few parts in the level that were significantly harder than all the others (this has been balanced out now). Despite all this, I thought that this was a decent level, and definitely deserves a rating by RobTop, but does have a decent chance of getting featured as well (You know what RobTop's like ) Gameplay - 8/10This level was really fun in my opinion, I really enjoyed playing it. However, there were one or two factors that brought this level down in terms of gameplay. The transition from the first cube to the first ship was a bit odd, as you'd end up screwing up your attempt if you jump right after passing through the teleportals, because your ship ends up crashing into the spike right at the start of the ship part. The blue gravi-portal at near the end of the first wave was slightly odd as well, as you could hit the graviportal and end up crashing into the ramp by accident because you accidentaly held the mouse button at the graviportal. Difficulty was balanced across all parts though, so well done with that. Design - 9/10I liked the design of this level, there was variety in each of the parts - it was obvious that he took some inspiration from other creators. The last wave part is still a little bit bland in my opinion, if you could add some BGOs then that would be really nice. Other than that, I really like the design, very nice, very innovative. Music Sync - 5/5Nothing much to say here - it was perfect. I found no flaws in the music sync. Total Score - 22/25Level Tier - Feature Worthy LevelsFinal Words + TipsI liked this level on the whole. At first I had some critiques on the level design as well as a few transitions and portal positioning, but it's nice to see that you've taken those critiques to make the level look even better, nice job. I'm glad that you took some inspiration from other creators' levels, that's how I started to develop my style and really experiment with different block designs to help put together a good level (Even though I never finsh any c:). Keep up the good work, keep using the techniques I've shown you, and next thing you know you'll be making amazing levels. I look forward to seeing what you create next. EDIT: The creator edited the level using some of the tips I noted. Scores have been altered. (Love that last ship part now, reminds me of one of my own projects... ) -Fabman650 /summon kiriE Rip the judge you wanted. Review approved moving to Feature-Worthy. I would recommend adding a little bit more details to your reviews.
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