Post by Zoroamaster on Oct 3, 2016 13:11:56 GMT -5
This level is so epic that it causes shock waves on your computer/mobile device Anyways, I was gonna make this a collab level, but no one wanted to, so I finished it myself. There is a bit of art at the last part so I was kinda proud of that. I also kind of want @tama and @robtopgames to see and judge my level so I know how good it is. Besides from all that, hope you enjoy the video
As always the information of the level will be in the spoiler at the bottom of the video. Tags: Tama_N & RobTopGames
Wow, very unique! It looks really nice, I love the variation of themes. Sometimes the design seems untidy a bit, maybe because of so many things overlapping each other and the colours clash a bit in some places like the red, black and violet at 0:46 and the colours at the start, they don't necessarily look bad just not as good as the rest. Good work
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I want to go over my judging criteria first so that you can get some information about how I do my stuff
Gameplay - 35% of 100 Originality - 35% of 100 Design - 20% of 100 Other - 10% of 100
Alright, let's begin shall we?
Gameplay - 29/35 Honestly, gameplay wise this level is very good. A few areas I wanted to point out is that the first UFO is actually a bit annoying to me. I dislike how the gameplay is and I think it can be changed into a better way and a better format gameplay wise. Also, in the first ship and the first UFO, you have invisible portals that change you from mini to large very often. I recommend you don't do this because I find this really annoying and it drives me nuts. Otherwise, some good stuff here includes some really good music sync which is pretty good for a level like this and just how the level uses all sorts of vehicles and types of stuff. The one vehicles I didn't notice was the robot and if I recall correctly, it wasn't in the level. The song seems to work great in some areas for the robot, so I think you would have a good shot at having a robot in this level. One of the best spots for the gameplay was the cube section where you teleport back and forth from normal gravity to upside-down, that was fantastic. I really like this level's gameplay.
Originality - 34/35 Nothing makes me more excited to see a creator create an extremely original level. This level has SO many parts that are super original and they seem really unique. Honestly, I am not a big fan of when levels start off with another vehicle other than a cube, but you do a very nice job with that and that makes this a little bit more original. The level is something I have NEVER seen before and I would really like to see more levels like this because how this level is just makes it 10 times better. However, I will say that the mini cube before the first wave seems a bit overused in a couple of levels, I have seen that before as an idea, it is a good idea, but I won't mark you that much for it, the level seems really good.
Design - 17/20 I really like how you built the designs for this level. I am also going to agree with TamaN first because some of the colors don't look as good as the rest in the beginning of the level and other spots, they do clash and they make some odd colors and I just don't think they fit for a level like this. Otherwise, the final area where the "earthquake" is at the end of the level is very cool and I really admire it as one of my favorite parts to this level. I will say that this level is very good in multiple areas and really doesn't need much improvement in the design category. A lot of this stuff looks really unique, just like I said above.
Other - 9/10 Now, I play on a tablet. It makes it a little harder for this. Your low detail needs to be earlier in the level because I got some lag from the first ship part and I really don't like it. That is basically the only problem here. I have mentioned before that the music sync is pretty good, I can't find any bugs, secret ways, etc. which is good news for you. I really enjoy this level as it is an amazing level and it was built very very cleverly.
Overall Score: 89/100 (Feature-Worthy)
Absolutely AMAZING level! You did a lot of nice work on this level and it definitely deserves to be featured to my extent. I agree with lots of things and this is definitely an amazing level. Once again, nice work.
If this level were to get a feature or star rating, I am recommending 8 for an rating.