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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Jul 3, 2016 15:32:45 GMT -5
Finally its done heres the info Name:The Beast Withins
ID:21356951
Creator:Hollow49
Rating I want:Auto 1 Star
What the level is about:Its a animation about a little girl trapped in a deep dark closet and theres the beast in there trying to kill her and the girl starts whining I want my mommy blah blah blah then at the end of the whining thing the beast goes on his mac and connects the girl to his mac then finds (girlsname).exe and puts it in the trash can then the beast says I knew she was weak then my player comes in and talks about the level then its done
Video:None because its too exhausting to make a 1 minute video
Difficulty:I had no ideas so Medium
I hope you like that level and please whenever you comment tag me with @.dabluebutton666
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Jul 3, 2016 16:08:16 GMT -5
Bump no input
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Jul 3, 2016 16:41:28 GMT -5
2nd bump no input!
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Jul 3, 2016 17:48:08 GMT -5
3rd stinking bump
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Jul 3, 2016 19:33:24 GMT -5
4th BUMP
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Post by iIMewIi on Jul 3, 2016 20:19:39 GMT -5
FailFish IF YOU BUMP IT, YOU WON'T GET YOUR LEVEL JUDGED ANY FASTER! YOU'RE JUST DELAYING THE PROCESS!
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Post by kiriE on Jul 4, 2016 12:35:38 GMT -5
FailFish IF YOU BUMP IT, YOU WON'T GET YOUR LEVEL JUDGED ANY FASTER! YOU'RE JUST DELAYING THE PROCESS! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Be sure to read the rules before posting, BE PATIENT. And bumping is not allowed, not to mention quintuple posts is DEFINITELY not allowed :/
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Aug 9, 2016 16:44:33 GMT -5
Bump
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Discord: milesman34#2076
Clans: a lot
Creator Points: 1
Favorite Level: not Alphabet X
Hardest Demon: Alphabet X
Mini-Profile Background: 36caa1
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Post by milesman34 on Aug 18, 2016 13:51:46 GMT -5
STOP BUMPING. JUST TAG SOME JUDGES ALREADY
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Aug 21, 2016 17:47:23 GMT -5
milesman34 could you judge this then I have been waiting since the 4th of july
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Aug 21, 2016 17:53:17 GMT -5
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Post by Breakfast Flake on Aug 21, 2016 18:50:48 GMT -5
This level is short. Like, very short. I don't think it's long enough for me to judge it, but I can give some opinions. 1. Please extend the level's length. It feels very incomplete and empty. 2. The designs there or detail are lacking much. Try adding more details to the girl, background, or both. Also try making the words appear as they are coming up under the girl, wait a few seconds, then they go down. I had to do a short review because the level was short, and the design would lead down really far. Great idea of a level though! Just add a bit more detail and lengthen it longer, then I will judge it fully
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Favorite Level: ur mom
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Post by Its Hip To Fuck Bees on Oct 1, 2016 19:17:30 GMT -5
Bump because 2 months
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Post by kiriE on Oct 2, 2016 10:48:47 GMT -5
Not only you bumped when people tell you to stop, you necropost. Necroposts are allowed in the judging panel. Alright, I'll try to review this, will be done by today hopefully.
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Post by kiriE on Oct 2, 2016 11:04:20 GMT -5
THE BEAST WITHINS BY HOLLOW49
Gameplay: There wasn't much gameplay considering this was a "movie" level. My only complaint here is that you should've hid the cube better, you can literally see it if you jump and the entire movie is locked to xy, which just makes everything look very weird and poorly executed. So next time, try to hide the cube completely.
Design: Unfortunately this was poorly executed. The story was bland and kinda hard to understand. Try to make the point of the film crystal clear. By this, I don't mean you can't make a level where you really have to think over what you watched, but this was just very weirdly made and the text came way too fast for me to read, and everything just wasn't that well-made. The girl is extremely poorly executed, you need to take way more time in designing her. The text was also really odd. It as I already mentioned came way too fast, and it especially didn't look good when everything cluttered over each other (especially at the computer part), and I suggest you to make the replies separately so not everything comes out at once and confuses the player. The torch is also really, really poorly made, and so is the cube in the end. Just all in all, take more time when building levels, to be completely honest, this felt extremely rushed. Also, please make the level much longer than this, it's way too short.
Music Sync: The music sync is basically non-existant. You could try to make the level fit a bit more to the music, even if it is a level without any gameplay.
Originality: The story was quite original, and so was the computer, but everything was poorly done, so it doesn't really help the level ;3;
NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
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