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Post by Cień Świetności on Apr 26, 2016 11:40:03 GMT -5
Trouble maker is a collab made by me and iIiMushiIi. I've made entire gameplay and Mushi design, decorations and effects. ID: 19271629 Difficulty: 8/9 No video. Sry. P.S Mush thinks it's a hard difficulty but I'm not sure.
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Post by DavidCreations on Apr 26, 2016 12:26:28 GMT -5
Witaj, Ternamicie. This level has pretty good gameplay, found lots of bugs tho. Deco is ok, i like that style 7 It wasn't really that hard, took me only 98 attempts, for me it's I see you and Mush taked effort on it, for me it should have a star (or even feature, if lucky). Overall rating: 8/10 Good job.
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Post by RyanAB on May 28, 2016 12:12:40 GMT -5
Hey ternamit, thanks for putting your level on the forums, much appreciate Here we go with this Gameplay: 13/15 Solid gameplay, some parts with keys opening doors were kind of hard to see and finding the paths for each were kind of annoying, but nothing too bad about the gameplay overall. Fun to play, but not to eat OpieOP Design: 14/15 I have seen the light, this level is amazing with design, i've never seen anything like it before, so that's a good sign of original design , kinda changed to an effect level at the last gamemode xd Flow: 15/15 Everything works well together, nothing to improve on or fix besides the stuff said above Originality: 1.2x (REALLY ORIGINAL) I like the design, and it's pretty much the most original thing i've seen today Overall: (13+14+15)*1.2x = 50.4 FEATURE WORTHY
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Post by Cień Świetności on May 28, 2016 12:26:24 GMT -5
Hey ternamit, thanks for putting your level on the forums, much appreciate Here we go with this Gameplay: 13/15 Solid gameplay, some parts with keys opening doors were kind of hard to see and finding the paths for each were kind of annoying, but nothing too bad about the gameplay overall. Fun to play, but not to eat OpieOP Design: 14/15 I have seen the light, this level is amazing with design, i've never seen anything like it before, so that's a good sign of original design , kinda changed to an effect level at the last gamemode xd Flow: 15/15 Everything works well together, nothing to improve on or fix besides the stuff said above Originality: 1.2x (REALLY ORIGINAL) I like the design, and it's pretty much the most original thing i've seen today Overall: (13+14+15)*1.2x = 50.4 FEATURE WORTHY So it looks like that now, huh? Ok. Time for some changes in my methods. Thank you for reviewing and showing me how new system is working now.
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Post by ~Pear~ on May 28, 2016 14:47:00 GMT -5
Why was this moved? Nobody approved the review lol
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Post by Viceroy on May 28, 2016 14:57:01 GMT -5
Hey ternamit, thanks for putting your level on the forums, much appreciate Here we go with this Gameplay: 13/15 Solid gameplay, some parts with keys opening doors were kind of hard to see and finding the paths for each were kind of annoying, but nothing too bad about the gameplay overall. Fun to play, but not to eat OpieOP Design: 14/15 I have seen the light, this level is amazing with design, i've never seen anything like it before, so that's a good sign of original design , kinda changed to an effect level at the last gamemode xd Flow: 15/15 Everything works well together, nothing to improve on or fix besides the stuff said above Originality: 1.2x (REALLY ORIGINAL) I like the design, and it's pretty much the most original thing i've seen today Overall: (13+14+15)*1.2x = 50.4 FEATURE WORTHY >complains about me being not specific enough >writes one line per section >moves level >isn't judge
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Post by RyanAB on May 28, 2016 15:04:34 GMT -5
Hey ternamit, thanks for putting your level on the forums, much appreciate Here we go with this Gameplay: 13/15 Solid gameplay, some parts with keys opening doors were kind of hard to see and finding the paths for each were kind of annoying, but nothing too bad about the gameplay overall. Fun to play, but not to eat OpieOP Design: 14/15 I have seen the light, this level is amazing with design, i've never seen anything like it before, so that's a good sign of original design , kinda changed to an effect level at the last gamemode xd Flow: 15/15 Everything works well together, nothing to improve on or fix besides the stuff said above Originality: 1.2x (REALLY ORIGINAL) I like the design, and it's pretty much the most original thing i've seen today Overall: (13+14+15)*1.2x = 50.4 FEATURE WORTHY >complains about me being not specific enough >writes one line per section >moves level >isn't judge It's really about quality, not how many words you can fit in a post ;p and if you looked closely, I covered everything he needed to fix, and provided praise on the many good parts also you really shouldn't be talking since you're one of the laziest judges ever
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Post by Viceroy on May 28, 2016 15:13:36 GMT -5
>complains about me being not specific enough >writes one line per section >moves level >isn't judge It's really about quality, not how many words you can fit in a post ;p and if you looked closely, I covered everything he needed to fix, and provided praise on the many good parts also you really shouldn't be talking since you're one of the laziest judges ever You're just being such a hypocrite right now. Have you seen the work I've put into my recent reviews? How can you even try to call me lazy? It's just your personal bias at this point. That isn't just meaninglessly seeing "how many words you can fit in a post". I'm going over every single aspect of the level. All you did here was drop a few words and move it, despite your lack of judge status. my last review for reference: Alrighty...let's get to it 8) Gameplay: 4/10 The gameplay isn't inherently terrible, it's just that it's extremely repetitive. Most of the level was just cube and ship, and there was very little variation. The level isn't 'fun' to play. I'd try mixing up the modes, adding more portals, orbs, etc to make it a bit more lively. It did get better at the drop, though, due to some more portals. But they only lasted for a few seconds, and then right back to ship >.> Design: 3/10 You used literally two varieties of decoration throughout the whole level. Those two styles weren't even that good to begin with, though At the beginning, the blocks are way too plain IMO. They don't work well with the background either. Those parallax-blob things in the background look a bit weird and blurry. Did you remember to turn on blending? The whole level overall is lacking in deco. The block designs are subpar, the backgrounds don't do enough to add to the level, and I just don't feel like what you did worked well at all. At 51% in the level, 0:36 in your video, what's up with those random lava pits? They don't really fit the level at all. Flow: 1/10 The level just doesn't feel like it fits with itself. It's just a repetition of the same two styles! Try working in more designs so that the level doesn't feel like the same thing over and over. It just doesn't fit well at all. Sync: 2/10 Almost nonexistent aside from the transitions and that red band background. Geometry Dash is a rhythm game; it would be best to try and incorporate more sync into levels you make. You don't have to have every note perfectly synced with the gameplay, but it should still be there. Originality: x1. Nothing strikes me as particularly original. Overall: 10/50 Needs major improvement. Moving to the appropriate section: Needs Improvement Good luck in your future creation endeavors! EDIT: First time reviewing in this system, I probably messed something up \(c:)/
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Post by RyanAB on May 28, 2016 15:18:58 GMT -5
It's really about quality, not how many words you can fit in a post ;p and if you looked closely, I covered everything he needed to fix, and provided praise on the many good parts also you really shouldn't be talking since you're one of the laziest judges ever You're just being such a hypocrite right now. Have you seen the work I've put into my recent reviews? How can you even try to call me lazy? It's just your personal bias at this point.That isn't just meaninglessly seeing "how many words you can fit in a post". I'm going over every single aspect of the level. All you did here was drop a few words and move it, despite your lack of judge status. my last review for reference: EDIT: First time reviewing in this system, I probably messed something up \(c:)/ And i guess the bias of many others too? ( ๑‾̀◡‾́)σ» and speaking of reviews when even was your last review? i remember you pretty much make 1-3 reviews every month
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Post by Viceroy on May 28, 2016 15:23:15 GMT -5
You're just being such a hypocrite right now. Have you seen the work I've put into my recent reviews? How can you even try to call me lazy? It's just your personal bias at this point.That isn't just meaninglessly seeing "how many words you can fit in a post". I'm going over every single aspect of the level. All you did here was drop a few words and move it, despite your lack of judge status. my last review for reference: EDIT: First time reviewing in this system, I probably messed something up \(c:)/ And i guess the bias of many others too? ( ๑‾̀◡‾́)σ» and speaking of reviews when even was your last review? i remember you pretty much make 1-3 reviews every month One week ago. Please refer to my status.
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Post by PersonMan on Jun 1, 2016 0:03:28 GMT -5
What just happened here ;3;
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Post by Xedron on Jun 1, 2016 0:07:06 GMT -5
What just happened here ;3; Please refrain from posting in already decided threads. It was just a disagreement over Ryan's system. No need to add more posts to this.
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Post by PersonMan on Jun 1, 2016 0:19:23 GMT -5
What just happened here ;3; Please refrain from posting in already decided threads. It was just a disagreement over Ryan's system. No need to add more posts to this. Thanks!
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